iight rules:
5 to 25 lines
and basic house rules holla wun...
You SPit FIrst
Due 20 MIns

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cheki chekin in

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Im Here

See Dawg Da Jokah Should Of Joined Wit Me,
But Now I Got To Give You Da Clip See If You Can Survive Like Fifty/
You Not Real Like Ya Name You A Jokah,
I Could Bet You While I Was Drunk And You Sober/
See Now I Dont Like You And I Berely Kno Ya,
So Ill Cut Ya Trhoat And Leave Ya Nothin But Head And Shoulders/
And You Speak Alot Of Bullshit Dats Why Da Area Stanks,
The Only Way You Win Is If You Llyod Banks/
Man Dis Lame Got Me Wastin Lines,
I Quit Rapping Cause You A Waste Of Time/

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I CANT BE WIT
IF YOU NOT WIT ME YOU AGAINST ME
AND IM READY 4 WAR PEACE
BATTLES DAT NEEDS VOTES

ayo

Slugga Aint Shitttt....

so iam a empty ma clip....

lets goo..
dis mans structures fallin like tha world trade//
like dis battle..dis man lose everything even his girls fade//
yo iam feed u Biskitz like u was lil scooby//
u aint a pimp..u couldnt get pussy even on a porn movie//
turn tha Beat up..grab tha Mic..hit u..
so u get Beat on Tha Mic//
nigga ma voice is like dat candy....
so u kno iam Sweet on Tha Mic
yo iam street respected..east and west connected//
bullets will be injected...you dead..tha feds inspected//
ya crime scene..cut ya stomach open..ya guts lime green//
fuck yo city..mines queenz..ma voice mad..meens iam mean//
iam a drug-tha...motha..that father Slugga//
iam a mug-ya..slug-ya or jus bug-ya//
yo diz bitch like fiddy,,he aint a gangsta he straight actin//
iam straight laughin..well i stay straight blastin//
at cho crib blast till its Ground Zero//
like world trade...
postaz err were iam ya new found hero//
girls fade....
hahaha

yo i spit fire...so my tongue is burn infected//
i slit tires..suckin ma dick aint gon earn u respect-kid//
so get off ma dick slugga//
blah blah blah muh fuckah
e.z

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uppin this

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Opening:Jokah
Wordplay:Jokah
Punches:Jokah
Structure:Both sucked but i give it to Slugga
Flow:Slugga
Ending:Jokah

V/Jokah

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*********Forgot to add..please vote on my battle in the sig

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iight thanx 1-0 favor on me uppin this

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Come On Lets Vote Ppl
We Need Votes!!!!!!!!
Will Return Favor

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I CANT BE WIT
IF YOU NOT WIT ME YOU AGAINST ME
AND IM READY 4 WAR PEACE
BATTLES DAT NEEDS VOTES

here's my vote...
bestline...
dajokah
yo iam feed u Biskitz like u was lil scooby//
u aint a pimp..u couldnt get pussy even on a porn movie//
too many one ups though jokah...although i know you wrote this just because you know you could beat him with that...
flow...slugga
multi's...jokah
punches
jokah

vote jokah...

please return the favor...i took the time to vote on this...
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135706

ok:
ima have to say jokah on this one, ya had good punches,creative vocabulary used against your opponent, and an overall better verse here......
slugga:ya took the structure and flow categories, but thats all, u needed to come a little harder, whats wit the fifty punches? anyways decent battle overall...
VOTE:jokah

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O Y D

*FluidMusic*


*Poetic Scriptures Moderator*

uppin this muh fuckah

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uppin this dont sleep pplz

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opening: jokah
flow:slug
closing:jokah
structure:jokah

v/jokah the rymes hit harder and made a lil more since