NOS dont believe my MULTIES ARE ANY GOOD
FINE I'll PROVE IT RAW AND GUTTER!!

NOS,
yo.. u aint 'Serious for one' ya 'rhymes dont make sense' u just a 'Delirious Bum'
and i 'Carry A Gun' i'll 'Bury you Son' cuz ya 'Lines dont make Cents' that's 'Why U Broke Bitch'
and 'I Tote Fifths' ya 'Diss to my multies was like stress weed! got me thinkin~ i dont wanna 'Smoke This'
i 'Spit Fire'~ 'Next Time' try to 'Fo-cus' on ya 'Text Rhymes' and ya 'Next Lines' cuz i got 'MORE HITS' then david 'Eckstien'
thats why ya chic got 'Sore Hips' and a 'Broke Spine' cuz i 'Blow out Backs' wit da
'Fo Fo Mags'
cuz ya 'Flo So Bad' u gone 'Grow 2 Be Mad' like a pissed off rapper wit ya 'Ho On Da Rag' while i 'Collect Chips' and 'Post At Da Pad'
u think ya shits 'Hot' so u just 'Boast N' Brag' but its 'Not', you need to stay 'Humble' cuz u aint ready for da 'Rumble' jus one of my punches will make u 'STUMBLE'
all 'Over Ya Words'~ fuck this! ima finish 'Early'~ im 'Ova This Herb'
he jus got 'Served' i grip da 'Pearl G' i dont even know why i came and 'Spit This' your not 'WORTHY'
i 'Rip Kids' and 'Split Wigs' u aint da 'Bizz' im 'Hungry For Da Beef' ill rip out ya 'Ribs' and 'Eat'
they 'Love Me In Da Streets' fuck this kat he cant even spell my 'NAME RIGHT' and imma 'Plain Sight'
u need ta get cha 'Game Right' cuz this was jus a 'Lame Fight'... i mean i was 'Tight' but you 'Like' an over 'Priced Mic'~ jus garbage im use to the 'Prize Fights' u jus a pussy like a 'High Dyke'
and ima 'High Light' try ya best! but u will never fuck up 'My Night'
ill 'Flip It' like 360 its 'Fight Nite' bet u chu thinkin now! damn that nigga Fraud Rhymes 'Tight'
Ez work!

Well, seems i've wasted my time in reading, yeah you can use multies but from what you've drop'd ya usage is wrong in more ways then one, for one if you wanna use multies properly you vocabulary should be up to par where you will not have to use slant rhyming not saying slant rhyming is a bad thing but the way you were talking i was under the impression you wouldn't use it but then agin i kinda figured you would use slant rhyming, another thing is your forcing your multies out and they should be natural when using them especially with a fucked up structure your using its hard to figure where you barz end and begin.

I.E. (Example)
'Why U Broke Bitch'
and 'I Tote Fifths' ya 'Diss to my multies was like stress weed! got me thinkin~ i dont wanna 'Smoke This'
i 'Spit Fire'~ 'Next Time' try to 'Fo-cus'

^^ Yours ^^

Norfolk, VA.....until 'My Casket Drops' This 'Laugh'n Stock'
This 'Laugh'n Stock' Ain't close or even ' Half as Hot'
'Burn Clowns' The 'First Round' Let the 'Magnum Pop'
So you can get the same 'Beating' That The 'Mavericks Got'

^^ Mines ^^

Next time you claim you can multie atleast do it right the first time so you wouldn't have to get feed like this. Good Day To You Sir.

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this is what i wrote in the other thread where you said you could rhyme multi syllables better than me................

aiight, fuck it
my multi syllable bold & pivitol cold n criminal
old n biblical double barrel loaded lyrical shit for you
to listen to, jus rippin crews since you was little dude
the sickest rapper, since you faggots stickin to ya pikachu
..basic...but spark my escalating philosophical stage
im demonstrating ill & logical states
while 'frauds' a frustrated illogical fake n closit gay, (got it? great..)
jus concentrate, n watch me droppin straight
multies at a monster rate, to correlate with what im sayin
n the same its like my life is a parody, trife & calamity
n style & profanity with the capacity to capture speech
n weave a tapistry to teach, tenacity is key
cause being an emcee is like splashing in the sea
n fuck the bullshit n fear, baphs the full quid, ya hear?
the cool kid, thats here to rap, & put shit in gear
nothin falty, the new school, casted vet pal
mr multi, fuck the old shit, arnt you better now?

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v/ Nos lol

lol.....well that was fun

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Thought I'd Add To It.

Im sick of the rumas bitch when i spit from da ruga
Ya gifts wouldn't come to US as the prince of Zamunda
Frauds think'n hes hot when his shits for the lossers
I'll bring the darkside when i stomp'n out....
....Like Mario went Sith on a gomba
I'll switch the style appropreiate, listen now n focus bitch
Shit you drop<----just flip it around and you'll still notice it
Gotta potent click look'n down on you clown im da pope of spits
Why you gloat'n prick? wudn't flow hard if you soak'd ya dick

just a lil key

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