10 lines max
No Feedin'
No Bitin'
No D/R
I will drop fist

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CarsonJetX2 a vergin rhymer I see his defeat colume amergin,
Hosts da mic clamin his wackness as i give him a verble merkin',
Hes herble spittin' wacker than a Will Smith writen,
Killin' himself wid words weeker than a fake myth bitten',
Came wid punches unable to penatrate his onsluate scared to fight,
Your rhymes cheep,wid no complexity your weights just too light,
You host da mic but chokes wid gaps 'un' wholes in his vocab like Garth Gates,
You drop lines but wack is in mind wen i discover u use other peeps on ur mix tapes,
He's potenchail Dick rydin' Mc wid rhyme weeker than day time tv,
My punches leavin' him speechless and only able to mime me.

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this needs to be in elevated.....not frontlines.
mod move this.
your gonna lose...how are u 11-0?

Moved.. but considering how everyone is new here, you probably won't be getting much votes in Elevated

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Lyrical MC.......

Everything about u is wak
your styles worse than Rapbattles new banner
....chek his lyrics....
What's worste? check the sig, dawg work on ya grammer!
11-0?....Peeped ya past, an I just don't see it....
Must be searchin for a loss....Callin me or Phinox
100 times I seen this, newbies got your confidence going...
Undefeated n glowing....But now it's you I'm throwing....
1 L follows another, Lyrical....and Ima help start that trend....
The newbie thread's are over..there's no more room for make-pretend..
Mix ya face wit my fists....till I develop a crimson blend...
Wait till it clears up, Then reinforce my fist again....

lets get some votes on dis......even tho dis battle will neva be finshed up in ere

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Lyrical MC...........that verse was kinda weak.........



^^^it was like you was tryin to come hard.....but you couldn't...............your rhymes were kinda elementary.........no wordplay......no spelling.....nothin....I don't see how your 11-0......no beef....just real...................3.5/10

Jet........your verse was ok..............nuthin really outstanding.....but you had some nice personals............and your punches were better............



^^^nice personal.....but you kinda fed off his verse..................4.5/10

Both ya'll didn't really impress me like I thought I would be by lookin at your records..............

umm...u didnt vote bro....

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Toon your couldnt do any better.

Is any one else sick of newbies nocking there verse's when they suck?
staring to piss me off.
maybe thats why im like the only vet on here....

and fed off his verse?

what a fuckin moron....it's his sig!

HAHAHA! Shyt the only red neck newbie around here for as long as yo week ass record holds is you, man you make all newbees sound tough, and this Vet look even more glorified. Stay undershadow ya lil slug, or get a spine and step to da RAP DON! BUt ya better off pissin ya pants and runnin, fool!Ahahaha!




v335T4R*****

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LMAO...Neways...Upp Dis Shit..

Would Vote But Carson In My Crew..

UPP DIS BATTLE PEEPS!!

~R~

This is why i'm inactive on new RB...
flock's of newbies who think they are ILL....
and wakness outnumber's skill on this site. It's a damn shame.

Yo...I hope I am aloud to vote on this shit...this was a tite battle, dawgz...I think it was pretty close on both sides...

Lyrical MC- I thought you came pretty hard...on your first 2 bars. Everythin' went sorta downhill from there...you still came a'ight, and I probably couldn't do much better, but you coulda cam harder.

6/10

Carson Jet- Your verse was sorta the other way around...your opener was tite, but everything got better as it went along. Punches were dope, flow was perfect...everythin' a verse should be...

9/10

Vote- CarsonJetX2


No hate...could you plz hit these up? Thx...

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...740#post1212740

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117367

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Shit...just saw that I couldn't poll...sorry about that, dawgz...

Much respect.

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