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Untraceable 4 44.44%
FlOw InTeLLiGeNt 5 55.56%
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Old 01-15-05, 10:41 PM   #1
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FlOw InTeLLiGeNt vs Untraceable

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Topic = Frustration



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Old 01-16-05, 02:45 PM   #2
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FlOw InTeLLiGeNt has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-16-05 02:45 PM.
 
Old 01-16-05, 03:05 PM   #3
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Untraceable has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-16-05 03:05 PM.
 
Old 01-16-05, 07:42 PM   #4
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Topic=Frustrations of the past


Lets just rewind time back to the time where my mind was scuffled
Troubled situations brought creations of pain so i decided to huddle
My muffled screams were only percieved through the sound seeping
Recieving noise threw the walls, left awake weeping instead of dreaming
Leaving me emotionally distrought but who woulda thought it ended soon
So impactions from that baseball bat left countless blue and black bruises
Abusive past caused the memories to last forever, if only life was better
Never the less the memories began to stress causing my face to weather
Constant times where you could here a grown man be broken down and
Unspoken on how and why i cry because the night my body was pounded
Scared for life on the inside because i was never encouraged or inspired
All the lovers are liars for the secrets kept made our relations grow tired
In dire need of something good in life but i cant ever seem to get it right
So i write to release the feelings from the many frustrations of my life
Aspirations of succesion i thoght would leesen the degree of my memory
But gradually it began to put an impression on my life and it'd never leave
So im left in forever greif and the financial situations are hard to handle
Down to using candles to brighten the room, the house appears in shambles
Breaking things to deal with the notions of what my past has been invading
Creating a life of stress and i put my emitions to the test, its so frustrating


DONT GET IT......DONT VOTE
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Old 01-16-05, 08:27 PM   #5
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Life has it's troubles, And life has happiness and joy
But life can grip your soul, And play with it like a toy
Make you do the undesirable, Unspeakable actions
Innocent masses.. Have no visible time for relaxing
Millitant fascists, Frustration packed in immigrant caskets
Of the dead souls being shipped away filled with gases
So im frustrated sitting, Staring at a grimmacing corpse
Father time mentioning a death wish that was forced
Of course, Life has me frustrated fallin off of my course
Death was my main frustration straight from the source
I faced the inglorious hordes, Who consumed my soul
Frustrated they made me and now resume to mold
Me into the infamous person that they wish i could be
Throwin useless knowedge like theyre pissing on me

Frustrated - because life is not as easy as it seems
Frustrated - because this isnt the world meant for me
Frustrated - because my vision is tainted when i see
Frustrated - because frustation is the only way to think

You live my life !.. Just take a fucking walk in my shoes
Just listen to the voices telling you exactly what to do
I dont have my own life.. It belongs to someone else
So please, Believe, If you think you can fucking help
Cuz people have tried before, But the joy just faded
And they dont realize... Why this boy is frustrated
It's an on going circle, Fire has encompassed my heart
The pain inside, I try to hide, But it rips my chest apart

So you ask why am i frustrated ? That answer is easy
I hate my life, Hate the strife, I just dont want to be me
Everything i do is constantly overshadowed with hatred
And everytime i get close to joy, I dont seem to make it
Something evil's pulling me back, Away from the dream
A nightmare it seems, Where i let go of self-esteem
And tumble in a downward circle, Into a frightening place
And go faster and faster, Towards a hightening space
Where frustration doesnt exist, Life is easy, No pain
Where i can not lose, But have everything to gain
A happy scene, people come and go like a bus station
If you want a great life, Just let go of frustration
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Old 01-17-05, 01:33 AM   #6
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solid drop fam........good luck

uppin
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Old 01-17-05, 12:50 PM   #7
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uppin...........lets get some votes on this.......you shoulda made the posts to vote like 300 not 500 but i understand why u did......cuz of wack voters
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Old 01-17-05, 11:58 PM   #8
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uppin.............................................
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Old 01-18-05, 08:02 PM   #9
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uppin.............................................
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Old 01-19-05, 03:20 PM   #10
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Voted For: Untraceable

DAMN THIS IS THE FIRST TIME I EVER READ UNTRACEABLE SHIT AT FIRST I THOUGHT FLOW WAS PICKING ON A NEWB THEN I READ THE VERSES FLOW GOOD VERSE NICE STRUTURE AND DECENT IMAGERY VOCAB COULDVE BEEN BETTER BUT DECENT NOT A GREAT PICTURE BUT THE POINT CAME ACCROSS.NOW UNTRACEABLE GREAT PICTURE VOCAB IS PERFECT STRUTURE ALSO SHIT IS DOPE AS FUCK I WAS REALLY FEELING THIS PIECE FOR REAL FLOW NO HATE BUT UNTRACABEL GOT THAT AND I KNOW YOUS A FAIR DUDE SO YOU CAN SEE THAT.
BOTH PLEASE RETURN HONEST ONES BACK THANK YOU
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Old 01-20-05, 06:59 PM   #11
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uppin for more votes...........................uppin
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Old 01-20-05, 07:29 PM   #12
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Nice Topic Battle Here

Flow Intelligent:
Nice drop from you here. Liked the way how u used big words...lol but anyway, you did very-well on this topic on Frustrations...a few lines could have rhymed better though...didnt really feel the emotion on this piece though but u had a good topic-drop though...no hate

Untraceable:
Your drop, I felt a little emotion up there..you had a good story up in here too, rhymes was good, and flow on there was even to both of you, overall u had a nice drop too

Close battle to both of you, but Untrace took this one
barely.................though no hate though
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Old 01-22-05, 12:13 PM   #13
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up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up
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Old 01-23-05, 09:55 PM   #14
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up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up
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Old 01-25-05, 06:18 PM   #15
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aii this is what im feelin

My Long Ass Explaination
You Hade A Nice Topical Verse Im Lovin It But Ima hAve to go wit Da MAyne over There Untraceable.....You cam wit some nice Emotions but I Knpw ive Seen you do way betta But Whateva .....far As Your vocab go it was decent But some of ya Topical Went kinda off on a Branch But I Still got to what you was sayin But Ima Have to go With untraceable On This One Becuase he cam wit Some Nice Emotionz and stuff he really felt it That topic Infact I dont think it was flow that Messed up its the topic its jus to ...well.....Plain for someone like you to be doin But Like I said I had To edge this one out and give it to Untraceable....sorry Mayne....Maybe better luck Next time[/b]

PlEASE IM ASKIN AS A GENEROUS FRIEND PLEASE PLEASE RTF IN THE LINK IN MY SIG PLEASE IM BEGGING YOU TO RTF IN THE LINK IN MY SIG I GOT THE BATTLE BCUZ ITS 3-0 NOW BUT NOW ITS JUS BEEIN SLEPT ON ITS BEEN ON 3-0 FOR BOUT 2WEEKS NOW LOL SO PLEASE RTF IN THE LINK IN MY SIG ..................BOTH OF YALL .........AND DONT TRY TO VOTE AGAINST ME BECAUSE I VOTED AGAINST YOU FLOW BECAUSE THA WOULDNT BE RIGHT TO THE CORRECT WINNER SO YALL PLEASE PLEASE RTF
THANX
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