realization of reality's impossible.. //
I mean it has to be, 'cause what's real, I don't know anymore.//
all my hopes throw'n out the door,//
had a dream I was rich, an' I woke up poor.//
lifes a bitch fo-real, wait.. maybe life's already over...//
and this, this is just limbo we in yo.//
and life's really heaven, we go; there after we die in death.//
we dead right now, I'm-a try holdin' my breath to die again.//
maybe where I end up'll be better then this place.//
I can; only prey, un-heard words absurd thoughts like frozen flames.//
or tha show "third watch", what's to come, only time can say.//
but what's time anyway, it never ends so why do we.//
or do we end, are our souls eternally free.//
can we trancend between two realitys.//
or are we really stuck here, fucked to be rushed by fear.//
until we dust our last year, rust our last gear.//
turn to dust and uncovered in a hundred years.//
I wonder an' ponder under prying ears.//
try'n'ta hear; what my thoughts are.//
that's hard, 'cause my thoughts are not thoughts but ambitions.//
planned missions to capture wishes and ditch this life I'm livin'.//
this life I've been given just isn't real to me.//
I need a release to a new reality...//
(spoken)
"yo, hommie, pass tha weed.."

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uppin' this.. fuck the other one.. I don't care 'bout that no-more...

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yo kid i couldnt catch a flow to this shit at all....and could catch how to spit it wit ...wit how some rhymes hit here and there....shits off to me

yea, it's a really complex flow.. it was done to a scratch beat with alot of variations in rythm...

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i liked this one...it was bastract and i appreciate abstract rhymin...yo we gotta do a post together on some split you in half later like siamese twin namsayin...word if you down for it we could drop a complex/abstarct rhyme on these people....one

I had to read it agian to get the hang if the flow like they said earlier. But I can't really trip cuz I been accused of the same type of shit so it all G, pimpin'. This is coo. Honsetly not like Damn!!!, but it's not wack either. Keep doin you, its good to change style and experiment with different rhyme scheams, thats how you elevate yourself and the game.

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Bang On The Table Productions

^^thats exactly what im sayin...i thought this was tight...i liked the rhyme scheme...

yea yea... what the fuck do you think I'm say'n.... thx 4 replies

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yo nuff luv blunt i really liked dis 1 i think dat u have definately elevated as an emcee.. i liked da rhyme scheme and similes.u had mad vocab...damn what can i say everything wuz grimy dawg nuff luv...
p.s. eyo peep ma shit!