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01-11-04, 10:58 AM | #1 | |||||||
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is ya structure really that important in a battle?
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01-11-04, 12:27 PM | #2 | ||||
\/ pissing me off!!!!
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if your structre it always at opposite ends of the scale like this then yes!!!
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx but if their isnt much different, then no xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx it helps when reading also, an the point of your vere, is to make people to read it without tiring, an making it interesting, if your strucrture is every where then peeps are gonna thikn, fuck that!!!! peace
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01-14-04, 07:18 PM | #3 | ||||||
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Structure IS NOT very important, as DOS said if its all over the shit its not good, but if theres niot much diference its alright.
If it i structured better 95% of the time it will flow better ( unless the words don't rhyme ) This can be done by just shortening down the punches, and making them hard hitting but nice and short. If your not sure if it flows, actually speak the words out in a rap speed and see if it flows. PM me if you want any other help, or hit me up on AIM: Bkast00 pce |
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01-14-04, 08:52 PM | #4 | |||||
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Structure Does matter in a battle, it is not the biggest catagory but if the punches were a tie it would decide the winner
Your lines should be about the same length, not to long though or they would be considered Streatched lines xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx ^ thats a good length line...give or take, that is basically perfect flow if all the lines rhyme if you had lines like this: xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx ^ that would be considered streatched lines and it would cause bad flow, even though there the same length it throws off the flow because the lines are so long Also....in structure dont use ~~~~~, // or Bold, Capitals, """"", ---, == or anything like that excesivly |
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01-14-04, 08:56 PM | #5 | ||||||
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