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Old 12-24-05, 07:11 PM   #1
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Old 12-24-05, 08:08 PM   #2
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hmm listenin

nice into beat...gettin a feel for the song
openin chorus pretty decent
first verse nice flow pretty on point nice delivery
nice
again chorus is good
2nd verse nice drop all in all dope track never really fell off
nice deliverys by both
good word usage
gj fellas :]
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Old 12-24-05, 08:16 PM   #3
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on tha upper left side of my torso...?

lmao, ysdat, i cant make out half of wut ur sayin. prolly cuz of tha accent. LOL. aight, tha 2nd half i can make yo werds out alot betta. wu tu use 2 record? qualitys koo

chorus iz koo

jroy, good quality. i can make out wut sayin good.

i think u guys shouldve came alot mo gangsta n commercial n shit, i think thas wut u were tryna do lol

overall not bad

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Old 12-24-05, 08:36 PM   #4
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good audio homie shit was crisp clear i liked da beat n it had real meaning keep doin ya'll's thing on here.everything flow,structure,vocab on point a bit short but hey its all good
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Old 12-24-05, 08:52 PM   #5
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Past Tense, nice verse man, good flow and delivery lyrics were also pretty good, overall I thought you did a good job man. Ysdat you were better on this one except your vocals volume needs to be upped but I could understand you and the quality was better, lyrics were good but flow was a bit off but mainly you need to turn the vocals up.

pretty good track

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Old 12-24-05, 09:24 PM   #6
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nice beat, i love it, really underground, nice intro, hook is dope as fuck seriously, past tense, this is your best track so far seriously, wow poetic this is pretty good, i like the flow, original, past tense you really impressed me for the hook, this should have an award seriously like the collab song of the month honestly, cuz i love this track, overall a big 10 and im serious,peace
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Old 12-24-05, 09:38 PM   #7
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woord thanks for all the feed if u want me too drop feed hit me up with a link
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Old 12-25-05, 12:02 PM   #8
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My negga Past fuck it i liked it Jroy ..lol

Nice delivery u getting better each track...flow was on point ....nothing bad i noticed
am loving the hook wow...

Ysdat ooh lord....never listened to ya shit but am impressed ya vocals were low but overall am liking the collab nice
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Old 12-25-05, 02:49 PM   #9
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Thanks bro .
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Old 12-25-05, 02:55 PM   #10
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ayyy y's i think this was the smartest idea ever lol
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Old 12-25-05, 03:02 PM   #11
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most definitly. I had to re arange my 4 track mixtape to add this on it

*wishes i had more than 4 tracks*
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Old 12-25-05, 03:33 PM   #12
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lol hahahah looks as if this is the best track of december
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Old 12-25-05, 07:12 PM   #13
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maybe, but fuck knows.
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