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spit byu the upcmong hour..(in about 55 minutes)

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Check in. Hi there. Uh. No hour bullshit friend.
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Young Ps No Rapper…Need I Show You His Pic?
At Least He Fits In With Us…As RB’s New Slik!!
P Poses As A Solider...But Hes Nothing, Just A Fake Vet
How Can You Drop A Verse...His Balls Havent Dropped Yet!
Silently Losing My Respect...And That Of Everyone On RB
Cuz This Kid Tried To Come Hardcore...& Committed Sodomy!
This Kids A Pussy... See How This Small Frie Gets Whored
And See How He Wins...
...........................young 33 gunna: ima drop when i see urs
Does It Hurt Bitch…Indeed, Cuz He Knows He Can’t Face This
Cuz With A Picture Like That…Even A2Z Can Do A Remix!

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A 15 year old kid, and he still just developin his first fuzz.
I'll give ya creativity tho...
.....ya remix has a betta chance of beatin me den your verse does!
Challenge a vet to a battle, like da 17 others, your gonna regret dis.
Cuz only time people sayin uh and ah for you is wit Herbal Essence.
Its priceless, this battles comparable to an audio from Crysis.
Cuz you knew you were gonna die but Not Like This.
You a Picasso in dis battle, not artistic and you remain outta place.
Now like dat chalkboard in ya avy, ya perfect world's been erased.

Yup...your done.

damn...i gotta say pretty good battle here.....A2Z had some mad ass personals slingin....but Young P also matched him in that category......A2Z had weak vocab though......and u both had fairly the same structure...so i guess this battle is really gonna be decided on punches and wordplay....and i gotta give that to Young P for this line:

^^haha...that was pretty funny....

BREAKDOWN
Vocab - Young
Multis - Neither
Metas - Young
Wordplay - Young
Punches - Young (his hit harder)
Personals - Tie
Flow - Tie
Structure - Tie
Creativity - Tie
Complexity - Young
RhymeScheme - Tie
Overall - Young got this with harder punches.....A2Z had some good personals in the mix....but some of his lines were kinda old (balls haven't dropped yet line for example).....but like i said...Young got this with better punches....good read from u both....nice to see u back A2Z.....no hate...just a vote..

peace
4:20

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oh yea. and to clear up a lil confusion all might have.
Dat braces boy is not me. that is his "Remix" of me.
Ok. Bye.

ok dis one was tough
both had personals and both had good wordplay
wasn't really feelin the pics but whatevr to get an edge i guess...
young u were on the right track and would have made it even harder if u had not used this line...

Challenge a vet to a battle, like da 17 others, your gonna regret dis.
Cuz only time people sayin uh and ah for you is wit Herbal Essence.

its a dope line dont get me wrong.. the set up was nice..but i have seen that second line on RB and a few other sites...
you lost creativity points on that one.sorry man
no hate just call'em like i see'em

overall good battle very tough to call
but A2Z gets my vote here...


need a mod to poll this vote..its not letting me poll vote for some reason

Uh. you said i had da battle except for dat bar. So uh. I dont get it....
....You voted for him?
yea... ur a vet?
....................Uppin

um this was a close battle....A2z gave some nice personals witht he pic and what not but overall i really felt young P rolled nicely with his verse...His endin was neat along with his over all diss....Both good but i think im givin this to young P..overall

vote young P

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SOFT FOCUS crew record (3-0) Wits end ~ DOI ~ Central....now who's next?
sacred scriptures record (5-0)

let me make it clearer my friend

young u were on the right track and would have made it even harder if u had not used this line...

to make more sense of my statement i should have said...

young u were on the right track and would have made it even harder to choose fromif u had not used this line...

meaning the more i read your verse the more i felt it would have been harder to choose..but the fact that it was a played line...meant you lost points for using it...
i didnt say you were ahead..
it was pretty much even throughout the whole battle

and that line helped me decided which direction to take
dont take it personal...still a good battle


out...

ok. thanks to both^. uppin again. dont sleep please.
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eh...pretty weak battle....didnt like the pics and shit



opener+1-P
closer+1-A
punches+2-P
personals+2-tie
wordplay+1-tie
originality+1-P
complexity+1-tie
multis+1-blah
cornyness-2-none
enjoyment+1-eh...P

overall-...A2Z..(+5).....Young P (+8).....winner..honest vote..please drop honest vote here

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