Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-21-04 at 05:00 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Invader_ZIM has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 05:01 AM.

you sound big in this place well im herr to win this race and while im at it slap ya mom in the face leav her in a neck brace i leave you wit a head case you faggit your vocabs week you cant hack it this rap talent you lack it dont give me all this white shit you dont know me you say you got skill show me if not drop to ya knees and BLOW me you cant throw me im solid you sux i called it quit ya ballin dont hate cuz the masters here ta win you just sinned dont ever try to beat your god eva agin

MR. ZACHY DOOM has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 08:11 PM.

This name is just a joke,
If you didn't know it yet
If I get one more "racist bitch,"
It's your ass that'll be next,
I'll cut off both legs,
You can pretend you're a 'Nam vet
I've brought this board so much joy,
You're all forever in my debt.
Since this is a battle rap,
I guess I'll battle myself,
'Cause you just aren't worth the words,
Another face on a shelf.
You should know that I'm a pussy
I wouldn't hurt a fly
I've shot a couple people
But only with a camera's eye
So you better watch your back
Let's not hope you die,
I've got this scary aura about me,
Pray that you survive.

Voted For: MR. ZACHY DOOM

ok whacked as fuck battle i refuse to vote neither of you really battled what can i vote on?no personals no punches or dissses this aint topical what are you doing please elevate

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^^zach got my vote cuz he had a descent strture that i could at least read and a flow thats all i could rate cuz yall had nothing else

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Voted For: MR. ZACHY DOOM

no one really came that hard....but

mr. hit harder in my opinion...
his was also easier to read...
both i see becoming good but just need to elevate

\/\/ drop honest vote\/\/ my voe "mr"

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Voted For: MR. ZACHY DOOM

wow incredible zach.....someone wacker than you!hahaha
ok i be nice
atrocious battle on both parts but im glad zach is attempting to battle now, he wins on personals if u can call them that
no metas no punches no multis
he wins on structure too, big improvement
flow better too
zim ya verse needs life support
i will gladly teach you how to rap in a battle just pm me ill set
up, ya disgraceful
zach glad my KO on you taught you SOMETHING
ok done, i said i'd be nice......

fuck it ill allow u to vote on mines
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...35&page=2&pp=15

Voted For: Invader_ZIM

Invader zim takes this one bcoz he had more punches. Mr Zachy Dooms verse didnt have any punches and therefore wasnt worthy of bein in a battle and would automatically lose in my eyes

Zim's verse wasnt too great, need a lil work in the vocab department but it flowed ok

Zachy dooms versed flowed nicly but thts about it

v/ Zim

Please return the favour by voting fairly in my battle with Word Processor

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=143304

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you both suck set up and ill battle you just put the drop limit on 5 days
nice name zim hers a pic i drew myself in paint a year ago i like the show
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v...z/ZIMSROBOT.bmp

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THE TRUTH IS I'M BETTER THAN YOU

Voted For: Invader_ZIM

nice multis they connected verywell. Also i dont understand y zachy called himself a pussy hell, i could do that for u .PUssy ass ni9, um white boi.anyway invader had a pretty decent verse.1

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Voted For: MR. ZACHY DOOM

I give this one to Zachy doomstar wateva it is, Altho the structure could use a little work, but the verse was good stuff. I cudnt see anythin as far as personals go, but Zzchy had much better wordplay,
I've shot a couple people
But only with a camera's eye
that line was the best in the battle.
I dont actually know where to start with Zimmo's verse
I can see where you were trying to go but there was just too much basic rhyming and the structure just throws you off straight away, but all i can say is improve your structure and elevate