im likin the beat
ooooooh gooood
I am SO sorry, but I do NOT like love songs
like the content, cos I think love stinks
but, Imma judge this on flow, and addlibs and shit like that

the delivery is nice
addlibs are a lil bit too high.
flow messes up a LITTLE ITSY WITSY tiny bit, son
I like this girl's singin
what are you?
like what nationality?
cos you dont sound black, and you dont sound white
you sound...ionno
but you pronounce shit differently, not a bad thing at all, its just somethin I noticed
the 2nd verse
damn, you prolly should've made the 2nd verse your 1st verse
just the way you start it off
quality was a bit below average
if the quality was stepped up, this could be sort of a hit. lile in your area and shit
but word @ a Valentine's day track, man.
I SHOULD make one, but ionno
anyway, man, this shit wasnt bad at all, a few faults that can be fixed as you get more into audio. Im assumin you're just now startin out.
but word
yeah
what was I about to say!?

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