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03-12-04, 10:32 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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I'm new at rappin, and need some help! Please somebody, help me!!!
IP: C1DA C961
I just started rappin, and I want somebody to help me out with my stuff. Anyone interested in helpin' me? If u are give e-mail me at SPuL7988@aol.com.
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03-13-04, 12:04 AM
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Suspended
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IP: 300C 17DB
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03-13-04, 04:10 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
thanks, man. Yea, I noticed the tutorial page after i posted this. I copied them and pasted them on Microsoft word. lol Hopefully, nobody minds. But Feeble looks like he has many people wantin' his help, so would anybody else be interested in helpin' me out?
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03-14-04, 03:24 PM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 45E9 D054
what u need help with exactly?? pm me
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03-15-04, 09:26 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 03C2 3387
thanks, man. I sent u a PM. I just basically want someone to look at my stuff and analyze it by each bar.
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03-15-04, 02:45 PM
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New to RB
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IP: 87E3 F209
pm me a verse, everyone else on here is garbage except me ryuu and syntax mastery
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03-16-04, 09:17 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 03C2 3387
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116499
That's my most recent verse |
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03-16-04, 10:09 AM
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IP: 87E3 F209
you have an humorous style which is good, but your flow could be better
you should try using multi-syllable rhyming ex. your first bars ends with get torched in seconds/ your second would be im sick wit torture methods/ |
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03-16-04, 10:09 AM
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New to RB
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IP: 87E3 F209
try it
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03-16-04, 12:42 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 03C2 3387
ok, I'll try that once I get home from skool. But I still don't get it. Is it that if you use a word like you used torched, you then use a word that's close to it like torture? Someone told me that ur bars should have the same amount of syllables in it, but I guess that's wrong. But if u have AIM, could u prolly explain it to me there? My AIM is SPuL7988. thanks
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06-06-05, 04:42 PM
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The Light
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IP: CAC5 15CA
Hahahahahahahahaahahahahahaahahahaha... :-p
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Can I Metaphor?
Mixtape Pushed Back to mid september.. Holla at me for a copy still I'm felt cause im real. Can you say the same ? Prolly not.
Proud OYD member again
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