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Old 09-04-03, 04:12 AM   #1
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2:56am Cinamon Toast Crunch Wallaby'z (battle freestyle rhyme)

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now class is in session... and I'ma teach a topical-lesson...
what you say is not-of-the-essence...
for me rhyming is just a hobby dog...not a profession...
a lot-of-contesants try to challenge-this analysis...
gettin' hit with multiple punchlinez could end up in paralysis...
I'm the catalyst in all the battlez-shit I get involved-in...
my rhymes are so concentrated
that even ya watered down linez won't act as solvents...

it's appallin' when I spit sick lyrics with a sharp tounge that could sever-ya-kneez...
I got you on lock so I'ma call you AJ cause you think you run the show you can never-be-Free...(106 and Park)

now this is just some shit that's comin' off-of-the-dome that you might-savor...
my rhymez got nice-flavor...
but you the type to be locked -in-ya-home reinacting Star Wars with a friend usin' ya cock as a light saber..

I type now but I'll write-later...with some nice-vaporz that I'm breathin'-in...
believin'-then you be like Toni Braxton cause after you fuck with me you'll never breathe-again...

it's deiceivin'-when you act gangsta until I own total controll-of-ya-set... that you chosen-to-rep...
now that you been sonned...call me father nigga...show-some-respect...

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Old 09-04-03, 05:16 AM   #2
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wow, REAALLY nice dawgy, you got the knack for this open mic shit...
now this is just some shit that's comin' off-of-the-dome that you might-savor...
my rhymez got nice-flavor...
but you the type to be locked -in-ya-home reinacting Star Wars with a friend usin' ya cock as a light saber..
LMAO-nice as fuck line
props dawgy
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Old 09-04-03, 02:47 PM   #3
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tight drop,i liked it,good multis good wordplay,good structure,keep droppin.~1~
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Old 09-04-03, 02:53 PM   #4
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DAMN THIS SHIT IS TIGHT, REAL REAL SHIT DOG, THATS GANGSTA

i like the 106&park shit
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Old 09-04-03, 04:11 PM   #5
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thanks y'all...still uppin...
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Old 09-05-03, 07:02 AM   #6
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thanks y'all...still uppin...
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Old 09-05-03, 03:52 PM   #7
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yuppin'...c'mon kidz...
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Old 09-05-03, 04:54 PM   #8
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nice drop
nice flow and vocab
keep droppin

peace
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Old 09-05-03, 09:40 PM   #9
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that was sick...i get the feelin you wrote that at basically 3 in the mornin lol...but you still brought killer constructivity...punches an flow an creativity was dope...peace
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Old 09-06-03, 01:04 AM   #10
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u got nice flow, it was all good
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Old 09-06-03, 01:09 AM   #11
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that was straight up hot as hell. i was really feelin that shit the hook was hot too keep doin ya thang son....hot shit
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