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Old 03-16-06, 09:20 AM   #1
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Punchlines For Dat Ass

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I Ain't Gone Start My Comeback By Spittin In Riddles
I'm a come by ya crib and shoot thangs that'll blow out ya middle
Let me break it down for those who ain't gettin me
I'll put a shell in ya brain n blow ya head off like John F. Kenndey
I blow bluntz not them small ass joints
I Ain't Woodrow Wilson but I'll give ya ass 14 points
I'll pop ya top just like Pringles
and shit on ya like Papoose on Busta's brand new single (Touch It Remix)
Man I got Gunz like Corey to blow ya ass outta proportion
And make you wish ya moms woulda got an abortion
I'm tha type of nigga that'll make you deep throat his gun
Let it bust in yo face and make you swallow tha cum
Tha way I eat Emcee's up ya'll would think I'm cannibalistic
But it ain't that it's just that half of em suck and I'm just gifted
Yo I quit sayin my name when I rip on a track
But just so you know it's me I'll yell out Tha Prince Is Back

It's Been A Minute Since I Posted On This Site Hope Ya'll Give Feed Sumthin Ya'll Aint Never Really Did

Holla

I Am Tha Prince
 
Old 03-16-06, 10:39 AM   #2
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I blow bluntz not them small ass joints
I Ain't Woodrow Wilson but I'll give ya ass 14 points

Yo Yuh Flow Iz Retarded Kidd!!! I Luv'd It FoRilly
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Old 03-16-06, 12:21 PM   #3
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damn i gotta say diz is hot u did tha damn thang kid ...nice comebacc
str8 fire

I'm tha type of nigga that'll make you deep throat his gun
Let it bust in yo face and make you swallow tha cum
I blow bluntz not them small ass joints
I Ain't Woodrow Wilson but I'll give ya ass 14 points
^^^^^^^^^^
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Old 03-16-06, 01:36 PM   #4
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this was pretty good, nothing amazing, the structure was ok and the flow was consistant, but i didn't really see that many punhclines........overall it was a bit average......rtf in my om's
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Old 03-16-06, 07:35 PM   #5
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This was nice for a comeback, the vocab was good, the flow was straight. Like tech said, i didnt see too many punches in this. My favorite bars were:

I blow bluntz not them small ass joints
I Ain't Woodrow Wilson but I'll give ya ass 14 points
I'll pop ya top just like Pringles
and shit on ya like Papoose on Busta's brand new single

^^ That was nice man. Keep it up and please rtf on one of the open mics in my sig. Thanks and Peace.
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Old 03-16-06, 10:25 PM   #6
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This was decent.....punchs were played get fresh ones up...but it was ight 6/10
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Old 03-16-06, 11:08 PM   #7
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is u tha one on openzine?
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Old 03-17-06, 07:18 AM   #8
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yea Ax Dawg It's Me Tha Kid Aka Tha Prince Of Tha SOuth
 
Old 03-17-06, 01:10 PM   #9
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nah son.. this shit was wack, yo.
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Old 03-17-06, 01:43 PM   #10
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I don't give a fuck long as niggaz give feed back.. But i'll Prolly murk you n a battle
 
Old 03-17-06, 01:54 PM   #11
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..yea right son, ur an embarrassment to Mississippi, biatch.
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Old 03-17-06, 03:34 PM   #12
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Closed , Pm me two links if you wish to re-open this
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