RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > Fresh From The Lab > Textual Releases
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 09-30-04, 09:10 AM   #1
Cerulean
Light Weight
 
Cerulean's Avatar
 
Posts: 279
Joined: Jul 2004
From: Munich, Germany
Status: Offline
Text Record: 4-3
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
Fulcrum Shift (Album Version)

IP: E50E 658D

(Beat: “The CIA’s Trying to Kill Me” – Non Phixion)

For the right…

The world’s slowly unhinging…
Fringing on madness, rash binging…
On chaos like the balance is tipping…

Can’t have it like this…

Verse 1:

There’s not enough solutions and too many prayers
Too much fission of big balers driving out the small players
A great many debts and troubles and not enough favours
Each day new mouths to feed but not always the means to cater
Way too many social layers, crooked mayors, too much division
Not enough public schools but plenty of state funded prisons
A great stack of jurisdiction, the Government’s on a mission
To cause havoc and friction livin in a world of science fiction
Too much diction and not enough vision, thought eviction
We don’t have enough coalition, the only thing I see is evasion
Too much separation, blacks, whites, Latinos and Asians
Not nearly enough unity but a myrriad of new nations
One million cocaine plantations but no 3rd world collation
The relation’s gone abstract, we’re backtracking in occasion
Patience is virtuous but not when half the world’s an aberration
Let’s face it… we been drifting apart since the day of our creation

Hook:

It’s a… fulcrum shift, the balance adrift
We gotta… lift world’s shards from the ash in our midst
It’s our… own fault the world is how it is
And its our… own fault if it stays like this
It’s a… fulcrum shift, the balance adrift
We gotta… lift world’s shards from the ash in our midst
It’s our… own fault the world is how it is
And we betta… raise our voices and shake our fists

Verse 2:

We gotta start taking action, the world’s slowly slipping
We’re tripping, some discussions but no one seems to be listening
Too many kids growing up whose dream’s are now missing
Homeless people sitting on grain, rap stars sipping champagne
Plenty of finger-pointing like everyone’s passing the blame
We gotta start using our brains before this whole world crumbles
There’s a rumble on the streets and the pivot’s ready to tumble
This world has too much hating and not enough loving
Hardly any affection but always plenty of pushing and shoving
Not enough real friends and too many wicked back-stabbers
A great deal of empty promises that all seem to lack matter
Too many people giving up and not enough faith or trust
Too many arrogant individuals who never wait but rush
Way too much show boating now, too many idiots only joking
When’s the last time you heard something truly though provoking?
Out of hand hoaxing and way too much sugar coating, gloating
I see plenty of telling but never nearly enough showing
Everything’s slowing, reality’s cloaking, too much dick-blowing
Towing us all along into a crooked state of knowing
Too much exemption too mention and not enough correction
We don’t care about prevention, when all we want is redemption
Tension in society, worries at birth, life and pension
Not enough protection by the law but plenty forms of detention
Mind’s too busy inspecting they neglect free thought and invention
Not enough power of one, we’re all just statistics and sections

Hook x 1

(Beat abruptly stops)

Man… who are we really kidding? It’s been like this since the beginning of mankind! Is it really likely this shit’s ever gonna to change? Check it out yo, it’s right here in the books…
__________________

People take my word even when I sound kind of absurd
But one senses nonsense when my two cents get heard





Rhythms

Want free beats? Check out Anno Domini Beats
Send a message via AIM to Cerulean Send a message via MSN to Cerulean   Reply With Quote
Old 09-30-04, 09:45 AM   #2
blazinlilmami
New to RB
 
blazinlilmami's Avatar
 
Posts: 61
Joined: Sep 2004
From: St. Paul, MN
Status: Offline
Text Record: 0-0
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 9253 500F

wow that was really good..it flowed really good had good structure n its true as hell good job
__________________



waddup gangsta!?!?!

R.I.P. Isaiah Ryder
7/11/82 - 2/26/04

tell all my people i'm a Ridah
nobody cries when we die
we outlaws
let me ride
until I get free
I live my life in tha fast lane
got police chasen me-Tupac

Send a message via AIM to blazinlilmami Send a message via MSN to blazinlilmami   Reply With Quote
Old 10-03-04, 10:48 AM   #3
Cerulean
Light Weight
 
Cerulean's Avatar
 
Posts: 279
Joined: Jul 2004
From: Munich, Germany
Status: Offline
Text Record: 4-3
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: E50E 658D

thanks, means a lot to me! any other verdicts?
__________________

People take my word even when I sound kind of absurd
But one senses nonsense when my two cents get heard





Rhythms

Want free beats? Check out Anno Domini Beats
Send a message via AIM to Cerulean Send a message via MSN to Cerulean   Reply With Quote
Old 10-07-04, 07:36 AM   #4
Cerulean
Light Weight
 
Cerulean's Avatar
 
Posts: 279
Joined: Jul 2004
From: Munich, Germany
Status: Offline
Text Record: 4-3
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 3AE7 A556

can i get some more opinions on this please? UPPPPPPP
__________________

People take my word even when I sound kind of absurd
But one senses nonsense when my two cents get heard





Rhythms

Want free beats? Check out Anno Domini Beats
Send a message via AIM to Cerulean Send a message via MSN to Cerulean   Reply With Quote
Old 10-07-04, 01:05 PM   #5
Terumoto
I have a lot to learn...
 
Terumoto's Avatar
 
Posts: 9,740
Joined: Mar 2004
From: Life.
Status: Offline
Text Record: 44-10
IP: 48EA 7C3F

^was nice. good content, good flow, good structure... it was a GOOD open mic.
id give it like 2/10 after pillaging... but before pillaging..

6 + 1.5 = 7.5/10

na'mean?

WHAT!

its 3am here! yeeaarrr
__________________
  Reply With Quote
Old 10-07-04, 01:16 PM   #6
fluidmoon
<<-Carpe Noctum->>
 
fluidmoon's Avatar
 
Posts: 2,183
Joined: Jun 2004
From: NEW YORK
Status: Offline
Audio Record: 2-0
IP: 28AD 5545

good piece, in depth and had great flow,,good content and use of vocabulary as well,
keep em coming, 1
__________________
"QUOD ME NUTRIT, ME DESTRUIT--AUT VINCERE AUT MORI"

O Y D

*FluidMusic*


*Poetic Scriptures Moderator*
  Reply With Quote
Old 10-07-04, 01:23 PM   #7
Ice Pick
GoD LiKe
 
Ice Pick's Avatar
 
Posts: 3,058
Joined: Jul 2004
From: Boston
Status: Offline
Text Record: 68-10
IP: 70A9 C9CB

Yeah this was nice

good flow and depth to your lines.....

Keep em coming and go peep some of mine
__________________
I am Here To Save You All
Send a message via AIM to Ice Pick   Reply With Quote
Old 10-07-04, 01:24 PM   #8
Ice Pick
GoD LiKe
 
Ice Pick's Avatar
 
Posts: 3,058
Joined: Jul 2004
From: Boston
Status: Offline
Text Record: 68-10
IP: 70A9 C9CB

ALSO

NON PHIXION AND NECRO ARE THE MOTHER FUCKIN BOMB


I LIKE THE METAL VERSION OF CIA tryin to get me
__________________
I am Here To Save You All
Send a message via AIM to Ice Pick   Reply With Quote
Old 10-07-04, 01:27 PM   #9
Cerulean
Light Weight
 
Cerulean's Avatar
 
Posts: 279
Joined: Jul 2004
From: Munich, Germany
Status: Offline
Text Record: 4-3
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: E50E 658D

Quote:
Originally Posted by Ice Pick
ALSO

NON PHIXION AND NECRO ARE THE MOTHER FUCKIN BOMB


I LIKE THE METAL VERSION OF CIA tryin to get me


yeah that shit is tight... i'm a real fan of all the artists on the uncle howie label... necro, ill bill, mr hyde... dayuuum
__________________

People take my word even when I sound kind of absurd
But one senses nonsense when my two cents get heard





Rhythms

Want free beats? Check out Anno Domini Beats
Send a message via AIM to Cerulean Send a message via MSN to Cerulean   Reply With Quote
Old 10-07-04, 01:40 PM   #10
Ice Pick
GoD LiKe
 
Ice Pick's Avatar
 
Posts: 3,058
Joined: Jul 2004
From: Boston
Status: Offline
Text Record: 68-10
IP: 70A9 C9CB

Yup Finally Sombody Else On Here Likes Them

Satanic Wordplay Feat, Necro Off Barn Of The Naked Dead Is Dope......

Fuckin Love The Shit

You Should Check Out Q Strange

He Is 10 Times Better
__________________
I am Here To Save You All
Send a message via AIM to Ice Pick   Reply With Quote
Old 10-08-04, 07:43 AM   #11
Cerulean
Light Weight
 
Cerulean's Avatar
 
Posts: 279
Joined: Jul 2004
From: Munich, Germany
Status: Offline
Text Record: 4-3
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 3AE7 A556

for sure... i'll go check him out. thanks man

UPPIN!!!!!!!
__________________

People take my word even when I sound kind of absurd
But one senses nonsense when my two cents get heard





Rhythms

Want free beats? Check out Anno Domini Beats
Send a message via AIM to Cerulean Send a message via MSN to Cerulean   Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 04:34 PM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.