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Old 10-12-04, 01:09 PM   #1
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Secret Annals (ALBUM VERSION)

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next track from my album... hook me up with some honest feedback!!


(Beat: “Secret Diary” – Anno Domini Beats )

Hook:

Turn the pages and travel through the ages
Put shameful secrets through fated paces
Place a finger on the Secret Annals (the secret annals, the secret annals)
Raise the linger of the Secret Annals (the secret annals, the secret annals)

Read between the lines and witness the times
Clear your minds and follow my rhymes
Proof is blind in the Secret Annals (the secret annals, the secret annals)
Truth is chimed in the Secret Annals (the secret annals, the secret annals)

Verse 1:

Ignoring premonition I step through the door
Fleeing legend's frail floor to mythical shore
Past myth's pious pore and mind's capped core
When 'here' and 'now' seem concepts no more
Yet where time's destined chore reminds us of war
Crimes of clandestine yore not remembered before
Blurring myriads of lore with fear, dread and gore
Lost emperors, warlords, living, dying by the sword
Implored fiendish vortex with sick, evil roar
Leaving death nor ruin too crude to explore
Atop history’s shelf ancient volumes and tome
Hiding secrets and shames, of gold, grief and bone
Of menace and clone wrecking spoil from high throne
Killing millions with bold stole by passion of own
Grown with demons of greed, stone-wrought cold all alone
Kingdoms crumbled, empires thrown with no mercies shown
Born sentences of demise in fancies fast flown
As reality is toned round a soft devil’s moan
All morality is blown, acts of menial drones
From the outside the mighty, but from the inside the crone

Hook x 1

Verse 2:

In illusion flouting reprimand peoples make last stands
Crusades across sands clashing sword, mace and lance
With races in bands, clans cast in livid raged prance
False honour and cause, Middle East, Britain, France
Across continents, lands, plains of life, death and chance
Fast hands dance, slashing, posing combat stance
Rants and mauls sparking brawls with sick evil glance
Walls of candid souls advancing in shaken ranks
Like scurrying rats wild hordes clash in trance
Predicaments of penance all religion’s gaunt plans
Actions create coffins as actors mould the nails
Hailed the dale of battle as waves of blood ripple and sail
Lakes of crimson ale, feeding land, sea and gale
Quailing bodies of frail shapes in pitiful wail
Flailed, ripped and cut, veined with fading bone hue pale
Bodies stiff and stale, laced in strings of entrails
Dreams shattered and jailed, faith shamed and failed
As baleful rulers step over corpses to touch their grails
Unlike the lies and tales, only death’s shadow prevails
Yet over and over the powerful veil the shame of war’s trail

Hook x 1

Verse 3:

Abstain and blame passed through a timeless chain
Feigning history and maiming the blame
Mankind’s draining itself from all sorts of plain claims
Playing off its history like a lame mindless game
Too vain to accept in retrospect our kin’s pain
Can’t crane our necks back, for the past holds no gain
In disdain I watch tamed by the facts, mamed and caned
The sane plea in our veins wanes with each new dark stain
Refraining from our mind grain, we won’t train our brains
And the same lanes we walked once we walk once again

Hook x 1

And I weep for my brothers, why must we kill one another?

HUH!?

Hook x 1

Oh how can I understand? Is this our fate's demand!?

TELL ME!!

(echo, fade)
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Old 10-12-04, 02:24 PM   #2
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to basic potential but not there dawg try bein more active like me i came from a hurb to a soon to be vet...i just need a lil work but your rhymes are a lil forced and your rhymes are way to basic..
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