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10-12-04, 01:09 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Secret Annals (ALBUM VERSION)
IP: E50E 658D
next track from my album... hook me up with some honest feedback!!
(Beat: “Secret Diary” – Anno Domini Beats ) Hook: Turn the pages and travel through the ages Put shameful secrets through fated paces Place a finger on the Secret Annals (the secret annals, the secret annals) Raise the linger of the Secret Annals (the secret annals, the secret annals) Read between the lines and witness the times Clear your minds and follow my rhymes Proof is blind in the Secret Annals (the secret annals, the secret annals) Truth is chimed in the Secret Annals (the secret annals, the secret annals) Verse 1: Ignoring premonition I step through the door Fleeing legend's frail floor to mythical shore Past myth's pious pore and mind's capped core When 'here' and 'now' seem concepts no more Yet where time's destined chore reminds us of war Crimes of clandestine yore not remembered before Blurring myriads of lore with fear, dread and gore Lost emperors, warlords, living, dying by the sword Implored fiendish vortex with sick, evil roar Leaving death nor ruin too crude to explore Atop history’s shelf ancient volumes and tome Hiding secrets and shames, of gold, grief and bone Of menace and clone wrecking spoil from high throne Killing millions with bold stole by passion of own Grown with demons of greed, stone-wrought cold all alone Kingdoms crumbled, empires thrown with no mercies shown Born sentences of demise in fancies fast flown As reality is toned round a soft devil’s moan All morality is blown, acts of menial drones From the outside the mighty, but from the inside the crone Hook x 1 Verse 2: In illusion flouting reprimand peoples make last stands Crusades across sands clashing sword, mace and lance With races in bands, clans cast in livid raged prance False honour and cause, Middle East, Britain, France Across continents, lands, plains of life, death and chance Fast hands dance, slashing, posing combat stance Rants and mauls sparking brawls with sick evil glance Walls of candid souls advancing in shaken ranks Like scurrying rats wild hordes clash in trance Predicaments of penance all religion’s gaunt plans Actions create coffins as actors mould the nails Hailed the dale of battle as waves of blood ripple and sail Lakes of crimson ale, feeding land, sea and gale Quailing bodies of frail shapes in pitiful wail Flailed, ripped and cut, veined with fading bone hue pale Bodies stiff and stale, laced in strings of entrails Dreams shattered and jailed, faith shamed and failed As baleful rulers step over corpses to touch their grails Unlike the lies and tales, only death’s shadow prevails Yet over and over the powerful veil the shame of war’s trail Hook x 1 Verse 3: Abstain and blame passed through a timeless chain Feigning history and maiming the blame Mankind’s draining itself from all sorts of plain claims Playing off its history like a lame mindless game Too vain to accept in retrospect our kin’s pain Can’t crane our necks back, for the past holds no gain In disdain I watch tamed by the facts, mamed and caned The sane plea in our veins wanes with each new dark stain Refraining from our mind grain, we won’t train our brains And the same lanes we walked once we walk once again Hook x 1 And I weep for my brothers, why must we kill one another? HUH!? Hook x 1 Oh how can I understand? Is this our fate's demand!? TELL ME!! (echo, fade)
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10-12-04, 02:24 PM | #2 | |||||
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IP: 5043 32F4
to basic potential but not there dawg try bein more active like me i came from a hurb to a soon to be vet...i just need a lil work but your rhymes are a lil forced and your rhymes are way to basic..
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