all i have heard bout this karlos fag is that hes wack,
he still woudnt hang with me if he was my nut sacks,
from the name he baries i could tell that hes a wetback,
lyrical flow is what he lacks,
hes so broke his pockets look like they on slimfast.
the definition of his rap style is lame,
hes so stupid he cant even spell his own name,
carlos starts with a c but you spell it with a k,
im overcommin in this game.
ayo, why you fuckin with da illest mexican,
ill' leave you like kanye west after his accident.
if i bust shots youll eventually get hit,
ill' leave your head split,
ill' use you as a toilet if you still dont feel my shit.
you fuckin with a mothafucka from 26th street,
your already feeling your defeat,
lil m.c.s like you is what i eat.
I left you with 16 slashes on your back,
now try to a comeback.

goin on gangsta cuz ya pockets full of shit//
supreme shame ya aint got a dick to put in it//
so a full clip shot at ma head to make it split//
ill av a sex change so you can lick my clit//
shall i drop my heart and quit like a homosexual//
supreme how bout ya come over here and lick ma left testicle//
merkin ya like grim reaper with a death sickle//
lightin yo ass up like a meltin popsicle//
strengh of an elephant heart of a lion//
supreme smoked dope then posted this shit so he thinks he's flyin//
clip in ya brain......muthafucka you dyin//
all you doin is cryin and bitchin//
yo supreme come here my right testicles itchin//
hmmm finga lickin//
demolish your just fat//
chalky just riding his luck//
and we all kno supremes in just for a fuck//
demolish you only in becuase you overwieght and can cook//
howz my flow flowin now after all ya advice//
kinda helped listen to the three blind mice//
i flowin faster//
than demolish chasin a custard slice//... haha pussyz

Fuck ya'll ill fuck all three of ya up if ya willin//
only one i respect out of ya is supervillain....

Rest of ya'll is pussyz

you stupid fuck i aint even overweight its probably your own reflection/
my senses is detectin your perspective of disrespection/
all of your bones are connected im the one to do the disconnection/
you admittin that you got a cliteris/
your sweet im comin wit bitter shit/
shoot ya in ya dick/
and leave ya wit a clit/
im unstoppable, bitch/
dog just leave me alone/
i damage you harder than chrome/
ill leave you missin a piece of your dome/
i dont want nuttin wit you/
dont act like my heat wont hit you/


you some pussy ass bitch. yo karlos, man dawg your really pissin me off. if you put me in one of your responsrs again im really gonna slaughta your ass. so just dont respond before i really have to kill you

ayo supreme, i give you props. nice fuckin metas. keep up the good work. one

damn, i dont know wat to say. the three verses were dope. karlos you got a lot of heart. supreme i like those metaphores. demolish you had some nice punchlines.
check some my shit out

ay yo fatboy this aint over....

cant leave ya i on ya like a leech//
till i flush ya down the toilet like domestos toilet bleach//
demolish you too fat your arms cant reach//...
demolish how can you walk with all that cellulite//
so fat you would give barry white in his grave a fright//
you wanna slaughter u know where im at letzz fite//....
neva had a girl because they cant see ya penis//
never kissed a girl.....ass the size of venus//
give it up demolish ya fat ass is gettin taken to the cleaners//...
dont know whether we will find some clothes for ya that fit//
because ya'll need a DD cup for ya left tit//
feel my flow bitch and eat my brown shit//
then come here fatboy and you can suck my dick//...
Fuck you fat boy look at my middle finger//
you a contender for the next pop idol fat singer//...haha
You spend ya whole life baking cakez//
because your so depressed bout being bullied over ya weight//
Dont cry dawg no one's untouchable//
but ya fat ass is just unfuckable//
how tha girl gon get underneath ya and keep stable//
one bounce and she's hangin on a telephone cable//
Fatboy here reppin chicago,fuck chicago//
stuff you in my truck like 800 pound cargo//
The citys only windy because you slipped and fell fatboy//
wake up you gettin ya ass whipped fatboy//

haha bounce ya ass home because you cant compare//
before you go can i ask....
what size clothez do ya wear....

haha fatboy ya ass got slaughtered...
lot of ass to slaughter aswell

nice wordplay karlos
demolish, your strucutre was kinda poor, but nice vocab and flow
supreme, you had boring rhymes and punchlines

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stay true, cuzez

thanx for lookin at this s-killz. ant body else got some feedback

who got slaughtered?

Me?? or them three??

damn karlos, i give ya lotz of props, fatboy got slaughtered, nice floes and wicked verses, pm me maybe we can become a crew and strat recruitin some more mexicans like us. want some of my floes-look em up i posted one in open mic, aight.

ill join ya crew i checked ya shit it aight i impressed

ayo karlos i told you to stop fuckin wit me.

fuck text im a reach you wit a different approach/
like i rather put a machette deep in your throat/
like a pencil you're number two/
this cat da supreme is new/
and he's already stompin on you/
ill give you hard knocks like jay-z/
if you had an x box you still couldnt play me/
to some your ok, to me your nuttin but a wack rapper/
if your life was a book ill put it on it's last chapter/
i beat rappers like you, and i do it skillfully/
if you wanna capture me your gonna have to kill me/
i've gotten tested and ill was my final diagnosis/
im a grab a sharp knife slice my wrist/
have you drink my blood and make you die of an overdose, bitch/
my hazardous flow will leave your dome split/
tell your chick/
to unzipp my shit/
and tell her to suck my dick/

so i gettin yo attention....

Yo take a chill pill and catch ya breath//
fatboy take one more step ya heart wil cause ya death//
Ya'll die on an overdose of cake//
like i said i finished you last time//
this is the last step you take//
Ill play you without an x-box//
you fat fuck ya'll eat ya spotz if ya had chicken pox//
your lettin ya crew down//
they are spittin decently//
you just feedin off em like they they marshmellow mc's//
how ya gon unzip and release ya shit//
wen ya cant get ya head round ya stomach to see it//.. haha
ya say ya rap skillfully//
but ya cant run because ya ass the size off philli//
thighs the size off cali//
i just made you my bitch ya new namez fat sally//
i heard you always eat cassarol//
you even put it in every spliff you roll//
you dont smoke it you swallow it whole//
so sally go home i just swallowed you hole//
and spat you the fuck out//
you dont belong here you just wack//
go back to sumo wrestling and fit 445 pound men in ya ass crack//
demolish if you even bother to reply//
ill tell ya now you will fucking die//......

quit rap and dont repond//
you got threw out of austin powerz//
now ya can be fat bastard in jamez bond//
so fatboy just dont respond....