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Old 06-03-07, 03:54 PM   #1
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Week One : Brandon Cialesek vs. Mav.

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Write Away Your Thoughts Mini Seed Tournament
Week One
Verses Due Friday 8th, 2007
Votes Due by Sunday 10th, 2007

Week One is [Insert Topic] Week...

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Old 06-04-07, 01:04 PM   #2
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Old 06-05-07, 03:43 PM   #3
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Old 06-06-07, 03:18 PM   #4
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Your Face

Thats the topic im doin you can match it if so........

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Old 06-06-07, 03:35 PM   #5
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Your face

As is stare,what is this?,alitterate,
so easy to read your skin
its like the sun,blinding your eyes with beauty within
a touch of the finger,a blossom of a flower
a rose pedal,or sunflower not much to think of
though ur face was amazing
like scalping your forehead....
your eyes are peeled,apeeling lingering thoughts
what masterpiece it is,perfectly cordinated
with beauty and a touch,its a syringe performing a deep cut
not much to ask for,a beautiful voice a choice
a soft whisper in your ear,as I lean closer to hear
ENVIGORENT,laughter passes my eyes
as I finaly expiernece truley divine



Close to my eyes
I think
What made this
no monster could
it came from heaven
the time was spent
but who up there would
create such beauty
a painting without a name
I grant it a visual first person
its healing look
if i died from a wound
fell over ontop of you
I would feel your breathe
as my mind races
kiss i am left
as I rise and I live again
so hard to miss

I think of your touch
the soft and pale skin
the truely divine
I hold onto my spirit
and untangle my eyes
like a tangled grape vine
you taste so good
I will grow you again
make you a drink
and live to see
your face is amazing
so beautiful
my mind
will never be changing



Lips are red and lushes
your cheeks begging for a kiss
something never seen,from Mars
you are the night sky
and I dream
to
to wish upon a star...
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Old 06-09-07, 10:53 AM   #6
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