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A LIFE OF CHRYME

Check...I Like Topic and i like freedom of beats...I will SHOw lol

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ok no doubt. and good job on the magaine

www.myspace.com/acuitymusic - all choked up ... like seei world around me as ive grown and how i feel shit need to be changed and y im scared 4 my lil bro n shit.

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Upin for Imps track.

str8 track Ac...but thats an old track man. You dont want to make a new track?

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

i talked to R.Bjork and he gave me an extension so heres my song

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=424396

called "Help Them".

Implicit - lol at the beginiing..feeling that singing...beat is hot..qual is good fam..and when we gon collab! mayne....get on aim mufucka...lyrics are hot mayne..ya flow is hot too..im feeling the emotion crazy..like how u used..fo they know not what they do...im feeling how u spit this story mayne...didnt expect this..8.5/10

Acuity - choked up....man this beat is hot..and the emotion on tis track is crazy..liking ya flow..that street smart line is nice...damn this is real as fuck its crazy..."banana clips leaving any gorrila humble"..dayum!..hook is dope 2 mayne..hands down no flaw on this track mayne..implicit u came dope but acuity mayne this was crazy b...the only critique in the 2nd verse..packed it 2 many words in some lines..but overasll..9.3/10..this track is hot....

vote - acuity

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....suck a dick faggot.....

Acuity....feeling your lyrics. Dubs are off a little on your hook, but not that bad. Delivery was cool for the feel of the track. Sometimes it was hard to make out what you were saying, I don't know if it was your accent or your volume levels. Anyway, not a bad track overall....

lol.....intro was pretty wack man....the back in the day singing. Aight, verse kicks in and I'm feeling your lyrics man. Production was pretty well too. Hook was ass....no real thought or anything seemed like it was put into it. A hook can make or break a track man. Second verse was nice too.....

Damn, this is tough to decide cause both did well in separate areas. So I decided to literally flip a coin and Acuity won the coin toss.

Vote - Acuity

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okay...this is my break down

Acuity. your track was okay but I really wasnt feeling the beat and the hook. I couldn't understand what you were saying most of the time either. But I listened close though and you had some good multis but it sounded like you couldn't catch your breath so it messed with your flow. The lyrics at time whent off your topic too. You get a 6.5/10

Implicit.
Your approach at this was different. Most people would have talked about they own life and growing pains in the beginning. But your shit was tight. The lyrics was nice and on point here. Your Hooks ok, could have been a bit better though. the 2nd verse was really what got this for me though. All in all your shit was tight and you get a an 7.5/10

V/Implicit

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

ok both had about the same flow
i had to listen mad hard to acuity's track he got a really thick accent lol
lyrically i think acuity came a little nicer
but my vote is coming down to the hook and implicit's was jsut lacking my man
close battle though
i liked the signing in the beginning lol

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