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01-03-05, 09:38 PM | #1 | |||
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Ill.Logic vs. Premanition
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170366
Read and follow them, or suffer the consequences.
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01-05-05, 05:38 PM | #2 | |||
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check............................................. ..
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01-06-05, 10:24 AM | #3 | |||
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damn prem...its past wednesday...t-wrecks...extend the check-in time for him please....we must battle
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01-06-05, 11:02 AM | #4 | ||||
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check, sorry been away working..................
u know im here http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1883601 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1883615
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01-06-05, 11:16 AM | #5 | |||
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im thinkin 8-10 linez............4-5 barz??
wut u say???
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01-06-05, 11:42 AM | #6 | ||||
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werd sounds gud fam.....
gud luck pz
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01-06-05, 11:47 AM | #7 | |||
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g'luck to you to.....................................
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01-06-05, 04:50 PM | #8 | |||
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What do we have here?OoO, i c...premanition....g'luck to ya then...shall i get started.......
Ya Undastand? Im A Pro I Leave Emcees Like You Shattered And Bruised Fallen...I See You Already Stallin... Im Nationally Felt Live...I'll Have You Seein More 0'S Than The Dolophins Win Column// . . . Son.....Ya Scared And Shakin, No Need To Quiver, As I Hit You With These Punches U Didnt Kno I Could Deliver... Admit To The L.......Cuz We All Can See Premanition Is In Da Nile/Denial Like Goin For A Swim In Ancient Rivers// . . . Ya Boys Heatin Up . . . Stepped On Stage With A Pro, Whats Next? Lord Knows, Rhymes Are Ecstasy...U Should Tell By How I Crack On You Hoe... I Burn Foes, And Leave Witness/Whitneys Dead.......Cuz Dese Rymes I Spit Are More Doper Than Bobby Brown's Nose//(oh shit) . . . You Are Quick To Get Killed.......No-One Feels The Wrath You Try To Instill.......Watch Me Take These Acidic Vocals And "Spill".... Who Want Da Full Course Meal? "Fruits" Like U Get Sonned Quick...Dude Ya "Split"..."Your Case Is Closed" Like Ill.Logic Just Came With "A Peel"//(apeal)damn........ last bar was my favorite...so please...if u dont understand it dont vote... uppin ya verse prem
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01-07-05, 12:18 PM | #9 | ||||
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Forgot About This So Quick Verse Here
. . . . Same thread again, get off my dick bitch give me a breather… Man its only a sayin, u don’t really gotta ‘follow the leader’…(1) Fuckin life ‘Sentence’, just take a glimpse at ya ‘Structure’… Duckin this free agent, it took three threads to induct~ya…(2) Wanted to ‘Xcell’, yet continually claims to callin vets…(3) ‘Miami Junior’ to young to swear, yet spits like turrets…(4) Shocked at no prediction, man a ‘premanition’ is crucial… Influences people, you make them stick pins in the pupils… Explainations within barz, yet voters stil haven’t got a clue… Hate to bite dawg but…………’Yes, I am better than you’… . . . . (1) – His Leader In M.A.B (2) - http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170737 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170498 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170497 . (3) – http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=168314 . (4) – Miami Jr = MSN & Yahoo Name . . Uppin
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01-07-05, 03:11 PM | #10 | |||
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lol....last bar was funny....ite....uppin..............
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01-07-05, 04:43 PM | #11 | ||||||
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prem gets this...........he had better personals by far...his structure was way better...and i thought his punches were hittin harder.
Ill- you had good multies and ya first bar was good then tha rest just didnt connect very well they werent hittin hard. v/prem for harder hittin personals and punches |
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01-07-05, 04:46 PM | #12 | |||
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ight..........................uppin............... .....u didnt get the last bar tho.............damn....w/e....uppin
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01-07-05, 05:04 PM | #13 | |||||||
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vote goes to preman because he had some good punches and like the other cats are sayin...ill logic started out good but it almost turned away from the punches and it went into almost self glorification to me...his structure was little messy... gonna go with preman for the punches,structure n flow
{v} Preman
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01-07-05, 11:54 PM | #14 | |||
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fuck.....everyone told me bout this self glorification shit...i'll work on that......
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01-08-05, 03:25 PM | #15 | |||||||
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Are More Doper Than Bobby Brown's Nose//<<<<best line in the first verse, other than that the verse was extra trash, illogic you gotta work on your structure ya bars be way too long when you drag em out like that it takes the effectiveness out of it, i was sittin here tryna rap the shit to myself and was gettin mad like damn this would be an iight verse if the bars weren't so long that shit killed it for me it had no flow to it half of it aint even rhyme
premenation there where no real faults in your verse, no real highlights either but it got the job done, so it's obvious who i'm pickin on this one vote= premenition
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