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Old 03-27-09, 09:34 PM   #9
SnoCap
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My punches make em C IV, i'l make em feel weary
Cuz even a trans plant just makes this grown man a fairy
na
Its quit obvious, he stays on-line, cuz in reality he always chokes
Yeah civil literally handin out cash?? Just a cover on how he sways votes
this was coo
Kid claimin he's a thug and g...check his youtube, tha kids a dweeb
Hes so fuckin dense even he can't finnnnd ooouutt how to runa league
lol... okay, i think you coulda worded it better too tho.
So stay tru to ur place Civil, u runnin all over the streets
Only cuz i placed you there bitch....with my bat and feet
na
N everyone should thank this dude, he's thinkin it through
Avatar under his name, just a Caution of how bad his bars will do
ehh
N Here's the dilema, i'd hand ya dope shit by i'd rather stall
Cuz this whole league only vote's One Way, or not at all.
okay... points for being true.



know you think u raw dog, but rep to the def? is that true?
Apparantly, since you the only fucker on the whole site still reppin a crew
ehh... this isnt true so i dont like it... the best crew still reps that shit.
U aign the best, you a fluke! "....on the daily" shiiiit, thats why u still in the hole
Cuz honestly the only way i see coke ''destroyin tricks'' is with his cereal bowl
the connection was horrible but the punch was decent.
I know ya'v heard it....
...I eat pieces of shit like u for breakfast! u cant compete w/ me dog
Kid started doin his own product, now look @ the bitch. HE AIGNT eatin @ all.
na
I'll toss the street with one of YOUR balls... throw you around like trash son
Cuz if thats the 3.5 u ratin on other peoples lines you needa go back to math 101
na
read what you wrote? i dont even like the feed in ya votes, Y hope 4 the win
When coke just gon turn up his nose....or go back to smokin the stem
na, this isnt true, he dont smoke crack... and this is basically a filler.
Dog you gon be eliminated THIS WEEK, so how you gon sign out next week
Go ahead be the dealer.....coke, and follow me to the next league
wasnt feelin it.


I think both of you need to work on connections and and wording... some of it is forced and this coulda been a lot better battle with some simple reconstruction.

I vote for coke cuz he had a few better lines.

Vote:Coke
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