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10-04-04, 01:46 PM
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..::shut the fuck up::..
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Fed Up
IP: 07E0 A9F2
went 2 east land and shot a police man beat ur fucking ass till ya teeth cracked Smack a bitch till she jumps of a bridge wid no remorse like im suppose 2 give a shit minds so crazy just to make ur brain achy tell me to quit rap shut up bitch make me things 2 depressive i'm 2 agressive im no one 2 be messed wid i'm distructive curuptive wish ya never lived i'll punch ya in da ribs till ya ass is sivved I'm ready for war mad dog yea u met me b4 kill da same bitch b4 strapp and explode u wid c4's trying to stay calm but I feel the anger in ma palms fight like a man wid both arms tention rings my alarms Slice ur neck wid a old razor blade wid ya neck open stop you from breathing u still try to rap how ya coping? Last edited by Da Point : 10-06-04 at 07:14 AM. |
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10-04-04, 02:27 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
if thats a little thing you didnt try on not bad man keep writen shit that makes you amd liek this man it'll coem dont worry... 6.7/10 check out my open mic when we meet links in the sig aight 1
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10-04-04, 04:15 PM
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IP: 07E0 A9F2
thanks man well im trying to get better that was a little practice I guess can you tell me what I need help more on to get my verses perfect and not get critocised and how I can get it better wid rhymes.
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10-05-04, 11:02 PM
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IP: 005F B7E2
your walk put the facts down cutie with booty some background so I act hound wanna attack and go down town// I dream about your body like it was cream and bacardi// bet your wet panties are silk and your candies are milk// duds come under the quilt with this thug love lets leave the club"// "wait MADD let me think a minute your plans have a kink in it// let me get this straight so I won't make a mistake huh? I give you cake then awake and go home? "yes" "hey that's shabby yo so hell no daddy yo MADD go find a chicken head and start licking her in bed she’s gonna yell cluck! Cluck! while yall fuck
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10-05-04, 11:39 PM
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IP: BAAD 84F0
um yo amn work on ur vocab and ur struc mayb although i undastood u sum otha muthfuak mite not get wat u sayin, ur wordplay also could use more work, besides that i think it was a good topic and it had decent flow and technique was pretty solid , 7/10, hit my open mic up "cruelty", iite -1-
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10-06-04, 11:56 AM
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IP: 07E0 A9F2
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From Eminem Murder Murder Feat Tupac I know i have the song BITER
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10-06-04, 12:06 PM
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I just don't give a fuck!
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IP: BDB4 B275
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OWNED! Wow Twice In 1 Day, You Are Lucky....... |
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10-06-04, 12:08 PM
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...Belong...
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IP: 07E0 A9F2
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Thas my lil sis  oh Sinner u got owned by a 12 year old lmao
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10-06-04, 12:12 PM
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...Closer Look...
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IP: E573 F882
 ......we need a hall of shame on this site yo...
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10-06-04, 12:14 PM
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...Belong...
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IP: 07E0 A9F2
Damn i jus realised sumthin...we all tried to remove Sinner on many occasions...and it took a 12 y/o to do it...LMAO
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10-06-04, 12:16 PM
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GoD LiKe
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IP: A23B D5BB
Yup
i have that song and that is it its on murder she wrote for the next friday soundtrack........
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