Comin' up on a reality thing,
that she actually seemed like she happen for me/
in the past in breeded some immacualte dreams
then said I lacked to see what she was askin' from me/
hearts made to be broken, highs must some down
gotta get used to her eyes of lust not around/
But it's cool, to young and sexy not to find a replacement
but a foolish form of jugdement got me tied and pacein'../
the floor, cuz the aura had me thinking that more
than four months I would adore so I scored in with the raw/
just that one time I ain't have no condom, no problem
I'll just pull out quick as a gat to spray a whole squadron/
..now things ain't work out, and I'm thinking the worst now
the thrill here done fizzled but I'm worried about a birth now/
I'm I thinking to much in my head now..just dream stuff
or a statistic of wedlock..it seems this month/
is going so slow, i'm foamin' to know
I'm i blessed with a preciaous soul, and one that just werck my own?/....
now Im on some fuck a bitch shit,
but when I literaly did it I get stuck with this shit/
Now I hope she never calls confessin' up
not cuz my life with her is over, but for one that just begun/

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damn pretty ill of a drop but i counldnt picture my-self goin in a bitch raw

dope drop keep em comin ya flow wasnt the best but the contene of the peice made up for it

you what's the word for this... umm... profound, hell yeah... damm dawg, got guts posting shit like this from your personal life, personally I probably wouldn't do it... maybe... I dunnoh...
Yo, this one's pretty short, but you get your point across pretty well, like this guy said^ your flow wasn't the best, but the rhymes were nice for this topic, not too simple, not too complex...
Keep spitting man...

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thanks so far for the replys, the rest of ya'll let me know whattup. I wrote this while Freeway's "What we do" song was playing and the beat kinda got stuck in my head and if any of you know that song it kinda requires a unorthadox kinda on-beat off- beat flow so it came out in type like that.
Uppin this

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^^ up

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man u had a good flow on hea,@ least u knew wut u wuz talkin bout.Soundz like a crazy situation..props to ya.Stay^
-Avi

Yhea, thanks Av ^^^

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^^^ Damn ya'll holla, good or bad

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