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08-08-07, 07:37 PM
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300 J.G....**Untitled**
IP: 20CD 5579
Lets Get It In...
This Is An Untitled Release, The Remains Of Naucous Times... Never Fall 2 Defeat, Call It The Ramblin Of A Raucous Mind... But When Death Is Defined, I Forsake Thee That Get Left Behind... Cuz I Will Be Waitin 4 The Day When Its The Time Of Those Scriptured Rhymes... I'm Battlin Back, Now Its The Time Of Random Attacks... Days Of The Truth Is Upon Us, Jesus Was Israli And Adam Was Black... They Say 'What Is This Kid Spittin', Relax And Hold The Phone... I Hold The Chrome, Can U Believe We All Are 1 Just From A Deformed Chromosome.. Its Crazy, But U Kno What I'm Sayin Is Just Pure Facts... I'll Bet On That, Others Talkin Bout 'Clips' Like They Workin In 'Office Max'... One Day I Dreamed About, Death And Unusual Casulties... Little Did I Kno That My Dreams, Would Actually Become a Reality... We Are All Victims Of Shame, Don't Put This 2 A Beat, Cuz Life Is A Game... Rememba Tha Name, I Leave U Wit 1 Question...Who U Kno Betta Than F@M3... FEEDBACK WOULD BE APPRECIATED....Links Is Comin ASAP
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08-08-07, 08:09 PM
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IP: 20CD 5579
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3179291
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3179293
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300 Junior Gunnerz *~FiNeSt OuT~* Vote On My Battles...Bitches
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08-08-07, 11:46 PM
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IP: 20CD 5579
Uppin This....Ya'll Could Leave Sum Feedback U Kno
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300 Junior Gunnerz *~FiNeSt OuT~* Vote On My Battles...Bitches
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08-09-07, 12:22 AM
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IP: 9204 9119
all right im back.....my bad for sleepin fams....
overall i can tell u tryin something different which is good.....it has potential though.....u got good lines in it and the concept is there....but got off subject on some parts.... Rememba Tha Name, I Leave U Wit 1 Question...Who U Kno Betta Than F@M3... ^^^^^ ahh i thought that line could of been left out and the line before this one should of been the ending it sounded better that way to me..... keep writing though fam i like to see different post like this instead of just always punchlines all the time.....~1~
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08-09-07, 10:02 AM
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IP: 20CD 5579
Good Lookz Fam....Finally Somebody Left Some Critizizm
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08-09-07, 10:11 AM
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IP: 3240 794D
This was straight man...it's some deep shit like something Common would spit...I like it...keep up the work
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B.uryin' E.mcees S.o T.remendously
I Only Spit Wit The B.E.S.T.
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08-09-07, 01:20 PM
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IP: C0A8 2430
nice drop fam....
i like this verse shit was good.... the flow was there... the concept was decent... fav lines.... They Say 'What Is This Kid Spittin', Relax And Hold The Phone... I Hold The Chrome, Can U Believe We All Are 1 Just From A Deformed Chromosome.. Its Crazy, But U Kno What I'm Sayin Is Just Pure Facts... I'll Bet On That, Others Talkin Bout 'Clips' Like They Workin In 'Office Max'... ^^ i thought that was hot... keep droping that fire FAM..... look foward to seening more stuff like this... 300 J.G WE POPP'IN OFF.... |
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08-09-07, 01:26 PM
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IP: 20CD 5579
Good Lookz Ransum And Konsept...
UPPIN
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