again.
lets keep it short troop
like 10 or so

10 it iz my ni99...

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Look Troop
We had our battles in the days, memories a goldmine
So I'll win, you take this L and we'll reflect on old times
We're both concerned with our country , though Bush is the root cause
He'll HAFTA reinstate the draft...once Im done killing the Troops off
My left hook'll get rid of ya brain..........
And when I swing..you'll be Dead to Rights 2..fucka video game
Ya girl be giving us brain, straight acting unruly
we've taken turns so many times you'd think we're practicing UE's
Shit voters'll even tell you, high or sober you trash
Da way they state troopers a bitch...U'd think he pulled them over in da past

almost no showed lol

Look Fam
we've battled numerous times but this round im flexin ya twerp
Hoes call u jose? cuz thats the only thing a mexican can werk
excuse me for being a JERK but you wont Win & i bet u wont bet
im sorry tav dont be mad that IM called sumthing that u dont get
its clear and plain you only shootin blanks consider u done son
here u come wit tha Bush Pun's....But u still havent touched 1
if i was a puppy 4 sale in a window yo ass still coudlnt get me
if i really was a trooper i'd pull u over 4 illegal attempt of an Mc
u a beast out the East,i came 2 Ny and didnt c u in ya Hood G
thought this would be hard
but tha capital letters in ya Location told me what it would be


Blah....

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We had our battles in the days, memories a goldmine
So I'll win, you take this L and we'll reflect on old times
We're both concerned with our country , though Bush is the root cause
He'll HAFTA reinstate the draft...once Im done killing the Troops off

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if i was a puppy 4 sale in a window yo ass still coudlnt get me
if i really was a trooper i'd pull u over 4 illegal attempt of an Mc
^^This wasnt good just wanted to point out that you fed off his verse

we've battled numerous times but this round im flexin ya twerp
Hoes call u jose? cuz thats the only thing a mexican can werk

not that great but made me chuckle

All in all kinda lame battle but i see that hot didnt really try in this battle nor did troop... or did you i dunno but blah

vote= Hot for a better verse wityh more quotable

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a girl be giving us brain, straight acting unruly
we've taken turns so many times you'd think we're practicing UE's
Shit voters'll even tell you, high or sober you trash
Da way they state troopers a bitch...U'd think he pulled them over in da past

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if i was a puppy 4 sale in a window yo ass still coudlnt get me
if i really was a trooper i'd pull u over 4 illegal attempt of an Mc

V/n.tavarez....this was decent troop you had acouple of decent lines but not quotes...you need to work on ya punchs and concepts...but the line i quoted was pretty good...hott...you had a good verse more consistent punchs and personals where solid you get my vote

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Look Troop
We had our battles in the days, memories a goldmine
So I'll win, you take this L and we'll reflect on old times
nah
We're both concerned with our country , though Bush is the root cause
He'll HAFTA reinstate the draft...once Im done killing the Troops off
purty gooood.
My left hook'll get rid of ya brain..........
And when I swing..you'll be Dead to Rights 2..fucka video game
alright. wording was bad though.
Ya girl be giving us brain, straight acting unruly
we've taken turns so many times you'd think we're practicing UE's
lol. cool
Shit voters'll even tell you, high or sober you trash
Da way they state troopers a bitch...U'd think he pulled them over in da past
pretty decent


Look Fam
we've battled numerous times but this round im flexin ya twerp
Hoes call u jose? cuz thats the only thing a mexican can werk
ehh
excuse me for being a JERK but you wont Win & i bet u wont bet
im sorry tav dont be mad that IM called sumthing that u dont get
ehh
its clear and plain you only shootin blanks consider u done son
here u come wit tha Bush Pun's....But u still havent touched 1
nah
if i was a puppy 4 sale in a window yo ass still coudlnt get me
if i really was a trooper i'd pull u over 4 illegal attempt of an Mc
aight, pretty cool
u a beast out the East,i came 2 Ny and didnt c u in ya Hood G
thought this would be hard
but tha capital letters in ya Location told me what it would be
alright, bit of a stretch


vote- tavarez. pretty obvious both rushed and didnt try. he just mainly had one line that i thought was good and that was the UE line.

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We had our battles in the days, memories a goldmine
So I'll win, you take this L and we'll reflect on old times
Ya girl be giving us brain, straight acting unruly
we've taken turns so many times you'd think we're practicing UE's
Shit voters'll even tell you, high or sober you trash
Da way they state troopers a bitch...U'd think he pulled them over in da past

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if i was a puppy 4 sale in a window yo ass still coudlnt get me
if i really was a trooper i'd pull u over 4 illegal attempt of an Mc

Tav came okay, nothing special but not bad for a 10 line battle. I feel like troop constantly sees the same nameplays on him, but the state trooper idea was cool, UE was nice.. opener was alright, wasn't dope, but a fresh way to state how you've beaten him before. Troop came with the illegal MC line, that was corny as hell but still made me chuckle... rest just wasn't as consistent as Tav. Mexican diss was weak, jerk is played, just wasn't really feelin' the rest.

Vote - N. Tavarez

N.Travarez-

We're both concerned with our country , though Bush is the root cause
He'll HAFTA reinstate the draft...once Im done killing the Troops off
Ya girl be giving us brain, straight acting unruly
we've taken turns so many times you'd think we're practicing UE's
^ those two were cool.. i imagine troop nameplays'll be played on dude but i've never read his battles so wtvr. the L shit was played imo.. but apart from that pretty decent verse

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Troop-
u a beast out the East,i came 2 Ny and didnt c u in ya Hood G
thought this would be hard
but tha capital letters in ya Location told me what it would be
^ the ec/easy wordplay was cool.. even if it was worded a bit awkwardly. i've never seen your shit before.. but to me it seemed you rushed yours so you wouldn't no show? either way.. i wasn't really feeling much from your verse. the 'illegal attempt at being an mc' was ight.. but didn't come off that hard hitting to me.

so v/ N.Travarez

We had our battles in the days, memories a goldmine
So I'll win, you take this L and we'll reflect on old times
Ya girl be giving us brain, straight acting unruly
we've taken turns so many times you'd think we're practicing UE's
Shit voters'll even tell you, high or sober you trash
Da way they state troopers a bitch...U'd think he pulled them over in da past

vs.

if i was a puppy 4 sale in a window yo ass still coudlnt get me
if i really was a trooper i'd pull u over 4 illegal attempt of an Mc

v/N.Tavarez

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Look Troop
We had our battles in the days, memories a goldmine
So I'll win, you take this L and we'll reflect on old times
We're both concerned with our country , though Bush is the root cause
He'll HAFTA reinstate the draft...once Im done killing the Troops off

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nothing

A lot of one sided battles today..wow..N.Tav really just got this with his 1st and 2nd bar to me. Troop just sounded the whole time like if he didn't care much for this battle. Not elevating at all as far as text I see. In my battle with him a long time ago he came a lot better then this. oh well.

V/ N.Tav

RTF.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235050

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