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Old 09-07-04, 11:13 PM   #1
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!!!Post Ya Best TRACK!!!..

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ayo this is how this thread is goin down...post the track you feel is ya best..that way we can peep it and rate it for you that way that song you think is your best isnt slept on..naw mean..plus since its ya best song cats is gonna expect heat and i cant wait to see what yall think is yall best track..

holla back 1ne..

-Good looks on this idea, I'ma stick it

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Old 09-07-04, 11:20 PM   #2
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well heres the link to my page the song i think that is my best has to be no doubt "My Heart & Soul" your gonna have to scroll down a bit on my page..due to the fact im always uploadin shit..lol..well you know what its titled peep it and drop your feedback please..


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/bronxskidmusic.htm

Lyrics

1st Verse

see when i blast a flow its like a cassicus blow//
to the abs and nose of the wack assholes//
who laughed but i've grown and mad that im on//
Sense ya keep hatin and you gon make'em use the flash on his chrome//
im the kid from the block, raps what i know//
used to sell packs my cash stashed in my soles//
i tapped ass on roxanne and samone//
grown bitches im known spittin the acid to bones//
i have grapse what is gold to rap//
my lyrics is my bullets so when i pull it on the auto mat//
all yall splat face it niggas all yall lack//
now yall body transported on ya four door lac//
sheeshh let it be brief if a letter to me//
gets sents sayin theres a better emcee i'll severe in three//
pieces i dont know what peace is//
i havent been impressed yet imma ya best bet thats is my thesis//

Chorus

see what i give ya is my heart and soul//
in every track every rap when i spark a flow//
hand me plaques cuz im phat//
see only god would know all the traps in path//
imma factor to have man i'll rapture ya ass//

see what i give ya is my heart and soul//
so any cat plenty wack when they start to flow//
granny raps its a wrap//
see if only yall would grow from the wackness ya span//
to ya trash little can learn ta rap little man//

2nd Verse

see on these tracks imma beast//
i'll smash ya wit ease cuz im beyond phat and pass the obese//
please.. im usually in my forces often//
im lyricallly naucious picture me corporate office//
all this raw shit, i sprout out of my mouth//
imma gangsta shank ya if ya doubt what im about//
now im the south, i done moved like yuhauls//
rotten yall ears out when i spew my few bars//
do my dued jobs//
yall niggas is snake and & fake basically like average boob jobs//
man too hard the viagra flow//
cuz my batterd soul exposed how my ballads smash the pros//
imma savage ask the hoes cuz i pull and dick'em//
& as far as battle yo i'll rip through any victim//
so who could evict'em when i get in the game//
my sweat and my pain yall aint gon censor my name//

Chorus

see what i give ya is my heart and soul//
in every track every rap when i spark a flow//
hand me plaques cuz im phat//
see only god would know all the traps in path//
imma factor to have man i'll rapture ya ass//

see what i give ya is my heart and soul//
so any cat plenty wack when they start to flow//
granny raps its a wrap//
see if only yall would grow from the wackness ya span//
to ya trash little can learn ta rap little man//

3rd Verse

learn ta rap heres the basics advance from the basic//
before you aint able and labeled trash in a waste bin//
im killin frauds swingin long swords like jason//
cuz i give it raw like fish store donations//
admit yall my spits premium hellium//
so if ya tryna blow up, of course you needin'em//
heatin'em skeptic's that is SenseRs hobby//
dont even sweat this or you'll get wet like pottys//
yes im probably full of it but if im pullin it//
ya mullet split or ya punched to ya jaw to the floors where ya mullers went//
and it could of been a fatal knock down//
from the craddle to the grave but my deaths not now//
act crazed you'll knocked out silly//
im not really fireee but im hot actually//
so ask any body who wanna depart and go//
i spark my flows givin ya my heart and soul..

Chorus

see what i give ya is my heart and soul//
in every track every rap when i spark a flow//
hand me plaques cuz im phat//
see only god would know all the traps in path//
imma factor to have man i'll rapture ya ass//

see what i give ya is my heart and soul//
so any cat plenty wack when they start to flow//
granny raps its a wrap//
see if only yall would grow from the wackness ya span//
to ya trash little can learn ta rap little man//


1ne,...

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Old 09-08-04, 02:23 AM   #3
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^ SICK. I have no idea what my best track is - its prolly my battle vs. Poetic Justice.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/phenominallmusic.htm

Not really a track, but my most comfortable flow so far. Dope idea for a thread

Phenom vs. Poetic Justice

Who dares oppose Phenom-in-all - huh? Poetic Justice?/
I bust this - gutless cat and make em nutless/
Don't rush this - even though you done in a minute, man/
I'm bout to prove why all the ladies call you a "minute-man"/

Begin again, - your drop can't match Vendetta/
Call Rapverse - a world war, I'm sendin your mom a letter/
I pack a cannon, While you just hold a musket/
Even Janet Jackson won't wanna peep Poetic Justice/

Phenom blowin up cats cause I drop bombs/
Call me a timeless wonder, just like all those hot moms/
Nah neva that - but I seen your pic on a dot com/
you said you lookin for anything, now girls be long-gone/

Rest in peace, or R.I.P. thats the acronym/
Call Cherry Hill Productions if you really need a battle hymn/
You shoulda paid attention - cats be sayin Yo don't battle him/
If PH is still phat, then boy I gaurentee you hella slim/

break...

Son You such a rook - I bet Phenom-in-all's lookin like a mad vet/
Son you're so brutal, I bet you couldnt even blast Jet/
cats puttin dough on you are bound to make a bad bet/
I peeped your text dawg - Have you even won a match yet??/

You dead wrong, and you got a B - I - G problem/
Cats know my name, and they will know that HE dropped him/
P knocked em, and even if you gon keep talkin/
understand this cops coloured chalk will keep-chalkin/

around your body, so just stop the monotony/
This battles a game to me, like a round of monoply/
you can't stop me, lyrically cats'll never top me/
only 1 cat can win, sorry kid, but you're NOT me/

It's a blessin to find, a cat who can mess with your mind/
Thats why Phenom designed, this battle line so refined/
You think you destined to rhyme, but I'ma mess up your spine/
decapitate you in slow-mo so you ahead of your time/
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Old 09-08-04, 06:15 PM   #4
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not bad not bad..it was definitly more on point wit the flow but still too many syllables in most of ya lines like i've told you in the past..cut them shit down..man and yall flow would be solid..iight be..but good track and thx for the feedback ..1ne...
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Old 09-09-04, 07:03 PM   #5
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S e n s e R - Nice track. I was feelin the beat, but I thought you could have done better with it. I thought the second verse had the best flow in it....like the second or fourth bar or something....

please.. im usually in my forces often//
im lyricallly naucious picture me corporate office//
^^^ That one.....lol. That was probably the smoothest flow in the song

I liked the song, but I didn't think it was your best......keep droppin

Phenom-in-all - Beat is nice......your vocals are lacking a certain luster in the quality. Flow wasn't actually that bad, but yeah.....maybe if you shortened up your lines a bit, it would have flowed a little better. Boooooo @ Monopoly punch....lol. Ahead of your time, kinda played, but nice song/battle track overall

Peep my verse against Kingz.....pay no attention to the chorus.....lol. I'm still trying to figure a few things out.

Dethroning Kingz
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Old 09-10-04, 09:10 PM   #6
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check out "BROKEN HOME"

just keep scrollin down....youll see it

but yeah senser,nice lil audio,but im not feelin that whisperin type of delivery for some reason....

anyways check it out...
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Old 09-11-04, 02:53 AM   #7
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me and Calam's best track yet for both of us:

Phenom & Calam - You Gonna Love Me

YOU'RE GONNA LOVE ME

PHENOM

Who it is... - ya ya'll know it's the Phenom/
all ya'll suckas know that He-strong, when the beat drops then I be-gone/
never Sleep-on...me , cause I correct you, when you be-wrong/
On the mic in front of the crowd - is where I'll always be-long/
yo I keep-on with the battles, but release my hidden genius/
My writtens are feverish, might as well just keep on freein this/
believe in this track, enjoy and live the experiance/
Just by hearin this - cats have been known to go delirious/

I'm Serious - so hate again, the fact that I'm Canadian/
Cats laugh, then hear my lyrics - and that gets em dazed again/
I play to win, Don't care if you a foe or maybe a friend/
I sprinkle rhymes with seasonin, so cold the way I'm freezin men/
I see ya end, Like sands through the hour glass, the hours pass/
your sound gets sour fast, when Phenom-in-all's sig-sauer blasts/
my power lasts, now the top cats watchin their throne/
Cause like a van on movin day - yo - I'm taking it home/ - C'MON

CALAMITY
Understand me dog, rappings the life i was given/
im just tryna be diverse like the color from prisms/
half the my battles i dont care about, the other half i be kidding/
i move my ball up the court, then slap it back like playing tenis/
most you haters are wrong, the other half of you chickens/
saying i suck on my songs, when audio you aint spittin/
im more than honest when living, sins not been in my mouth/
truth be told, i have better rappers inside of my couch/

ya'll cats is wack when im out,inactive and ya fires been doused/
i'll spit a hot 16 and leave your fired from house/
ima represenetive, my rhymes are definitive of the glory/
of a black suburban kid wit talent, but ignored of his story/
with out me its boring, so why yall snorin/
, the kids constructin a plan to bring wealth to his shore and/
insure that hes known in/, all the parts of the usa../
but look forward, Calamitys the only thing that stays/
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Old 09-12-04, 07:11 PM   #8
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Lost Cause...Lun Feat Sash

Let me know

*edit: No - we won't let you know till you got 2 reply's on 2 other joints
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Old 09-13-04, 03:26 PM   #9
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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/s...osophamusic.htm

I dont really kno which is my best...but i like them...
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Old 09-14-04, 03:00 PM   #10
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ayo diabloic im feelin that memories joint..nice laid back real track..chorus is real deep ..i love hearin shit like this when cats actually spend time on their lyircs nice joint homie..1ne..
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