A little bit i put together for this Tragade faggot who is so cocky that he wont even reply to me or trakk star.....

so im flowing acopella on this one....cuz this faggot cant flow on a beat so im givin him some breathin room.....lmao

LINKS:

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2655597

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2655600



LINK TO TRACK:

www.soundclick.com/snypaakarooftop

called: What A Tragedy

leave feed, ill RTF

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didnt want a beat.....jus wrote and recorded it....but i kno wut u mean

uppin

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not really feelin the intro.....lyrics are pretty good...needs a beat....that's the only thing i would say...good diss accapella though....but i woulda liked it betta if it had a beat with it....overall i'd give it a 7/10

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www.myspace.com/eastsyde34

www.soundclick.com/eastsyde

www.soundclick.com/djeastsydeaka007

koo thanks....uppin


besides beats...i want feed about the verse....

i kno it could use a beat...but i want feed about the verse now

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Alright You Want Feed About Your Verse

The Intro Took Too Long Personally Though

The Actual Lyrics Were Nice,Had Some Good Punchlines Lol@The Erect Line,Your Emotion Was Koo,One Thing Though...Try And Work On Your Breath Control A Lil....You Seem Confident Enough...Although I Felt The Presence Dipped In A Few Places,Try Work On That Dawg,You Seemed Agressive,Which Was Good For A Diss Track...Like You Really Meant It,Nah Mean?,The Delivery As I Said Was Agressive,But Try And Get This On All Of Your Tracks Cause I Heard Some Others..If You Get Everything Like This,Your Set....The FLow Was Good,Even Without A Beat,It Was Like Each Line Was The Same N Shit,

Overall Good Shit...I Think Its A Lil Weird Without A Beat...But It Doesnt Ruin The Track..Its Actually Quite Good


Keep Up!

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OYD MAFIA