Dat nigga D-Dizzle at it again...
walk wit da kid....

I’m at the level where it’s impossible for me to elevate
My chops salivate at the pound of the break beat, the sound of insane streets../
Motivates this poets ‘state of mind’, rest my ‘head in Michigan’
In the depth if listenin’ to the bowls of demons in my bed and wisperin’/
Provoking the locus like flowin goin’ to omens
To my tormented peoples who don’t know where they souls went/
This nigga tryin to move more souls than the S-dot-Carters
Contest my myters who’s sorry like the S-Dot-D-dot Padres, if I say/…
A verse, best believe it’s written in the ‘stone’ of ages
from the art form birth from Planet ‘Rock’, magnify the ‘gravel’ for clone of my faces/
‘cuz Im close to the streets, but my inner soul is in the heavens
Ghostwriting for the spirit of David, write perfected scrolls in the sevens/
Heartfelt flow conceive rain, while battle raps entrees thunder
Grasp the night to relive pain, and the morning sun to retreat under/
Cough out the clouds and take a shit in the form of tornadoes
I’m more than a mere emcee, I’m an immortal born to take over/..

Scream at cha Dirty

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Bang On The Table Productions

yo dog nice shit

check out my battle against Pussy ass Starrboy in de frontlines i think ull like wutchu see

let me no wut u think, peace

ayo i liked it, nice piece dawg just keep up tha work .................................................. ...........................

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Aiight then coo, uppin and rest of ya'll feedback

One-hun'ded

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Bang On The Table Productions

^^^^^^^^

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Bang On The Table Productions

Aiight uppin for feedback, I'll be sre to return the favor

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Bang On The Table Productions

i think you are concious and yet capable to be diverse in a multitude of styles even fallowing one scheme i liked this it was average for the cats i listen to but as far as main stream you would wax anybody

^^Aight then, good peepin' out on the feedback, thanks

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Bang On The Table Productions

Yo, back up^^^^^^.... give da kid some feeback, dunnies

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Bang On The Table Productions

Pretty good flow throughout, unlike some pieces I've read today. Good job on that.

Some pretty cool lyrics in here, but please get rid of the quotation marks, etc. around the wordplay. If it is true wordplay, cats will understand it without the fashion statement.

Overall, it's a nice piece.

Stay up and keep droppin.

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