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left feed on there tracks

new track feed is really aprecated if you give me some feed ill get back and leave it on yours

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/jnyceus_music.htm

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beat is koo
quaily is bad, ur vocals need to be upped and u have no mic presence, like u afraid of the mic. Flow is average, lyrics are ok, nothig special
emotion needs to be upped in certain spots, delevery needs work

Chorus wif samples and all dat is koo

2nd verse, same as 1st

practice ur timing, delevery and lyrics

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lol u ever heard of k-nice? i dont really like these kind of beats, flow seems forced but some good emotion f sho, lyrics i dnt like at all... the let me go part was gay to me but u got a road ahead of you ull end up aight if u keep at it... 2nd verse was terrible flow wise it seems like u rushed the whole way through.... i wasnt really feelin this, peep my track if u would return tha favor.. .good luck1

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thanks for the feedback i apreacate it...uppin

aright good feeback thanks man...uppin