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Old 12-29-05, 11:27 PM   #1
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"Bitches Need Luv"

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Yeah y'all diz is Payn on anotha level wit diz 1 here
my 1st time tryin out singin on a tracc so leave sum feedbacc & let me know wut u think about it

tha song "Bit**** Need Luv 2" is on point & hittin jus holla bacc at me

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Old 12-29-05, 11:33 PM   #2
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i said it earlier and im gonna say it again...u sound like a high pitched usher mixed with chris brown...but yea...the track iz cool...good job...
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Old 12-31-05, 06:44 PM   #3
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Aigghhhh

BEats Nice

Aighht

I DOnt Think You Can Sing Much Lol@OOOH

Flow Aight Needs Uppin
Dleivery Aight

Presence Not Good You Dont Seem confident

Lyurics Aight

well Just Keep Dropin You Will elvate Well

Overall 5/10

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Old 01-03-06, 08:48 AM   #4
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i feel ya & preciate ur comment but in tha beginning i told ya i was experimentin my 1st time tryin-out dat singin thang
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Old 01-03-06, 11:22 AM   #5
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beats hot,
quality is junky lol

WTF is the..singing? lmaoooo.. hell no man..wtf hahah

woah..u rap? if you do, stick to that please lol..
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Old 01-03-06, 11:32 AM   #6
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You = the BRO YAO of R&B
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Old 01-03-06, 11:36 AM   #7
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omg singin is fukkin horrible beat is ight if ya like r and b lmfaol @ ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
sound like u got boot in tha nuts fam if ya rap stick to tha cuz goddamn that singin is hard to listen to keep dropin youll get betta word one
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Old 01-03-06, 12:53 PM   #8
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lol @ Z-ro


hahaaa


ur mic's quality is not that great...either that, or your EQ levels need to be fixed...too much Bass and Boom in it...take that down...Also, don't speak so close to the mic....That causes what is called "tube saturation"


The singing on the hook is abominable...


Beat is kinda Late Night HBO porn --ish


I'm tempted to turn this off because of the hook...are you serious?


oh hell no


*shuts off*


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