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^Click on "Call to live"

Beat: Swollen Drumz
Hook: Q
Verses 1 & 2: Q






Concept: I'm grappling with myself, with the knowledge of our ultimate fate--death--and my strong desire to live. The hook is actually the last 8 bars of each verse, which the producer set at 24. I decided that since the actual hook segment of the beat sounded more like a bridge, I'd talk over it. If you're not sure what/where the hook is, I repeat it over and over at the end.


Enjoy




http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241918
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241887

intro comes in..i like this guitar feel..

talking is cool...like what you sayin


verse comes in really weird..kinda a clash between 2 different moods..lyrically..its cool. i like the 2 different mindset verses..

dont really like the hook too much

verse comes in again..i really dont like the transitions from hook to verse..flow works pretty cool on this verse. lyrically it was okay. nothing that stood out on the first listen.

hook comes in after some talking..nothing really catchy about this hook..could easily be forgotten

not really feelin this track man..it just seems like your last 2 tracks have been slackin the quality of other tracks you have done...get at me for a collabo.

^^Honestly, I can't remember one song of mine u actually liked.


lol

iz all good tho...I'm in my "experimentation" phase again.







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Hahaha.

that "what u been waitin 4" track was cool man..honestly the only reason im hard on different people is because i hear a lot of potential..

^^No doubt man...

like I said...it's all good...I post to get feedback...and then I take it into account


Im def. not afraid to try different things...it's how u stay ahead of the curve


It's all music man!!!!!!




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this is a cool track, i do't have much time 2 feed but it was a decent listen./.i see u experimenting hook-wise..im not feelin it but i like hearin new ideas

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^^thanx bro









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Listening..I'm feeling the beat and your intro..Quality is really nice..Ok, beat drops and you come in nice, flow is on point, and your emotion and energy are straight..Lyrics are on some diff. shit, it's ill. We need to get on a track together some time soon man, it's been too long. Overall, hot shit you got here.

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