Good drop bro, and great subject to write on
I agree with mostly what your sayin and connect to how you feel, the world is changing rapidly in a negative way, but sometimes, war is inevitable.
The flow was good and the chorus or hook fit well with what you were writing about, I think if you want you can make this much longer and it can be pretty dope

keep on writin man, just like me, it looks like your new to RV too unless you have another account, but anyways good job

my link:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=249828

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