ayo waz crackin
aint post on the net since i battled iLL chris

this a track me and my lil brotha did from a Cd i'm puttin together...

its called "can't be fucked wit"..
its really the remix but i neva posted the first one anyway so

peep and drop ya links...Top trak

peace

1st cat a little monotone, need to sound like he feelin it more, hook str8, 2nd cat sounds better, Bill Belemy line was nyce...beat was aight nothin special to me...overall joint was str8...peace
Peep dat if ya don't mind.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=34129
Peep dat and holla back.

First cat was too soft... good voice too....Lyrics were straight, I like the beat, Skoe you came nice, bowling line was tight ..lol.. belemy line was hot too, hook was stright.. 1st cat pick up emotion and youll be straight... Skoe had nice verse.. and the lyrics were nice all around couple hot lines.... Good drop..

eD

thanks for the peep crook ed
you too divine....

my brotha said thanks for the advice

holla bak fam

beats nice...

first guys too low,gotta get louder...needs emotion...lyrics arent bad tho...

second guys....flows nice,very ill rhyme scheme,deliverys good..lyrics are dope.. sounds very street,lol...

overall nice track..first guy gotta get louder...but other than that...its dope..

thanks dawg for the peep and the props..

holla bak

nice. yall sound coo 2getha. good voice on both partz. "i'll put 5 acroos ya 4 head like u salutin tha flag"...lol.tight..stay uppppppp

Aiight peepin it now, Never heard of you but it sounds good, Always good to hear talented artists,

Beat's coo, Grimey shit, Sound like something Mobb Deep would use..

Your flow is aiight, Energy is lacking alot though, Need to hype it up a bit since it's on a violent based concept..

Lyrics and quality are coo tho,

Hook is pretty nice, Not very catchy, But sounds pretty tight,

Second kid i'm feelin a bit more due to the voice, But him also doesn't have enough energy, "The Streets is the only way you earn ya fame" , "When I meet a chick I do her the same night" lol nice quotables.

Overall this shit is str8.