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02-18-04, 07:08 PM | #1 | |||
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7 Seconds
IP: 704A 79A4
lighting my life I breathe deep after moments
the price doesn't matter i'm addicted from loneliness a perfect showmen..displaying none of the agony unknown to feelings...because nothings a tragedy draggin me outta stress,I couldn't think anything less dependent on attention,i've learned this is the best so I digest the clouds and look at a plain surface only to notice my figure..figuring i'm worthless doing it on purpose the attraction never doubts me my reality counts free,but for seconds I oust me I'm about to be moved,but I wont be moving my breath is taken,but my legs aren't approving removing my situation I expect everything to stick because now that I love....it's making everyone else sick so I pick 7 seconds...quickly knowing my makers met my girl knows i love her but i'd die for a cigarette
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02-18-04, 07:12 PM | #2 | ||||||
Only One.
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This Was Great Nice Detail And Vocab.... I liked it Man Shuda been longer and it flowed nicely 9/10.
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02-19-04, 12:52 PM | #3 | |||||||
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I havent seen one of these kinda spit in a minute. Where you dont really figure it out til the end. It was pretty ill dawg.
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02-20-04, 02:27 PM | #4 | |||
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IP: 704A 79A4
good shit more feedback?
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02-20-04, 10:55 PM | #5 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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that was really hot
it flowed nice and everything keep postin |
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