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Old 11-20-04, 11:59 AM   #1
Hattrick
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"Carry" (short emotional)

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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/catastrophymusic.htm
(download/listen to the Carry Track, i fucked the order of songs up)

mostly did this for practice on flowing/timing, but at the same time i needed to get some shit off tha chest.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=1744635
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=161149
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Old 11-20-04, 01:49 PM   #2
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Yo i love that beat is by Alca rite?

Quality was blah!!

Rhymes were ok some i heard some i was unable to hear pop ups...like mofucka..lol

nice drop
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Old 11-20-04, 03:34 PM   #3
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This song is pretty dope...a lot of energy...the beat is good i got to admit...your voice maybe would be better with some lil jon beats ...i dont know why but anyway..
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Old 11-21-04, 03:18 AM   #4
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Beat was alright.....you mumble when you spit a lot....something i also had to overcome. Flow was alright through this except for a few spots......actually, it keeps coming up where you fuck it up....lol. Rhymes were kinda elementary. I was feeling the emotion, but you got a lot more to do before this becomes a good track....Keep Droppin
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