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10-24-06, 03:27 AM
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"Carry My Cross" *NEW from Implicit*
IP: FD80 6DB5
Here are the links I left feed on
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236194 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235921 This song is called "Carry My Cross". It's not fully complete. But I just wanted some feedback on it so I can go in and change certain things. It's pretty self explanatory. www.myspace.com/reflekt88 Leave some links and I'll leave feed on it. Last edited by Implicit : 10-24-06 at 05:24 PM. |
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10-24-06, 07:52 AM
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...Closer Look...
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IP: 016D 26FF
^ link to the track?
ur sig is not clickable!
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10-24-06, 05:24 PM
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IP: FD80 6DB5
thanks for lettin me know yvonne.
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10-24-06, 06:04 PM
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IP: 2372 BC06
alrighty, I like the intro of this beat. Can tell ya gonna go deep with somin you know. Oh yea I love this beat, nice choice. I like ya hook, very catchy and emotional. Very emotional which was a good thing. Your verse is good, I like ya lyrics though I'd prefer you to go deeper and talk bout the life of fighting for survive cuz thats what the hook sounds like. But what you did with ya verses was good anyway, fits the song. Your flow is good and emotion is good. nice deliverying it too. I like this track hellla man. good job
rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...993#post3096993
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10-24-06, 09:41 PM
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IP: 553B 235D
ehhh not really likin the begining of the beat ....hook is mixed aight vol needs to be upped verse one is cool lyrics is coo emotion is aight culd be upped...hook is aight like i sed verse 2 same as the first u need to make a difference between the verses....i like the topic but this isnt wut id actually listen to it...ight man do ur thing
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10-24-06, 10:13 PM
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IP: FD80 6DB5
thanks for the feed. ima get u both back on your tracks
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10-26-06, 03:09 AM
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IP: FD80 6DB5
ayo come on lemme get some feed on this.
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10-26-06, 07:51 PM
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IP: BE87 F5C3
intros wait to empty, needs somethin takin up that space. chorus is so so, sounds good, lyrics aint nuthin special. first has a nice start, im feelin this songs topic. verse2 sounds kinda plain. you lose your swagger on this verse, it stands out too much.
overall 7/10, good shit.
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10-27-06, 10:15 AM
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IP: BA27 7F10
hahahaha VTZ...
the intro was a lil too long...vtz do got nice beats but i aint feeling this 1...the hook is pretty cool ...oh u a christian rapper?...cool!...you got a steady flow...yep,pretty steady...you were entertaining cos of the switch in flow...delivery cud be worked on just a lil bit...quality is decent!..the only thing is you were a step back with the presence and emotion with ya verses...you left the beat to long u cud have fadded it out or something...but come to think about it this beat is actually relaxing...na i re-phrase what i said earlier...the beat is cool! keep it up... hit my siggy..any1 there!
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10-28-06, 06:53 AM
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IP: 7EBA 8803
Listenin''....
The beat is hawt..... Hook im likin'....nice lyrics.... emotion is good multis are nice, like the flow this song is good...lyrics are real 2, beat is real dope i think it makes the track that touch better the way it switches...emotion is good 2 fam...nice ttrack....nice song fam.... can u rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236457
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10-28-06, 01:40 PM
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IP: FD80 6DB5
thanks for the feed.
and yeah yvonne i actually didnt finish it so thats why theres such a large emptiness at the end. ima hit ur links |
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10-29-06, 03:43 AM
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IP: 8471 8CE5
Listening...
Beat is good...liking it. You come in pretty good man...flow stays on beat consistently. Lyrics are well delivered...you showed good emotion in your voice. Hook is pretty good...could maybe be a little more catchy. Pretty dece stuff...keep it up. RTF: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236476 |
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10-30-06, 01:51 PM
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IP: FD80 6DB5
uppin this for more feed. and thanks to everyone who already left feed
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10-30-06, 09:34 PM
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IP: 48C5 C14C
ur flow waz good
vocals a bit low concept aight.....im not much of a churchy person overall track waz aight keep up tha work |
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11-03-06, 04:22 PM
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IP: EF75 889E
I was gonna use this beat...yep but not anymore, I like your chorus. I'm feeling your flow, you sooo laidback, it's a gift and a curse because I expected you to jump on someone's neck and throw your lyrics at their head haha but not too have too much force on top of the beat, maybe a nice balance of the two (if that makes sense).. But this was nicely done in general. = )
rtf.... 
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