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02-14-05, 10:32 PM | #3 | ||
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i'm just starting to read these poems so i'm not really good at judging them, yeah but i think my favorite part of the poem was the last two lines, i just think you need to get deeper with what it is you're feelin and bring out more emotion into your poem instead of "i need you" stuff. but that's just my opinion. i liked it though.
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