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10-21-04, 10:04 AM
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Thoughts If in my attempt to full fill my quest I swagger, sway, stumble and forever rest Don’t dial 999, jus let me die Go clubbing after my funeral, don’t you dare cry I might have not chosen this time or place Don’t shed a tear for being here is a disgrace To me happiness is positioned out of sight Knowing I can’t save my people I bawl through the night Flashbacks of battle fields, genocide, my people dying They want to kill me, not hear me, because I know the governments lying I am not asking much from this democracy Just let my people go, take away the barrier of hypocrisy Consider the youth, who stare out there shelters with childish fantasies Someone think what you are showing us please Take me as a martyr just promise justice to my people, for the years after Do not hide behind your masks, fancy clothing and laughter Now I’m standing awaiting to catch my last bus Stay strong without me, do not let them cuss Answer me, What has become of man? They stare because of the skin I’m in, while they hide behind a fake tan Heart pounding, bleeding red like we all do, Stare at me and answer what is the difference between me and you? You do not have 2 cage me or put me in an institution Just don’t call me people dumb for Tony Blair the one in need of tuition By Lena Arshad Last edited by ¥ung_gÅl_†®àumå : 10-28-04 at 11:57 AM. Reason: nobody left feedback |
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10-21-04, 11:15 AM
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wow, dope poem,,,real deep and in tune with whats going on in the world right now, good piece to sit back and ponder about its meaning, i liked this a lot,,nice job..1
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10-22-04, 06:44 AM
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same hurr, i dont usually lyke no petry unless its reel meaningful an decent, an diz wuz, keep em comin, very enjoyable
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10-28-04, 12:03 PM
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kk anytyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyme now u can leave feedbacl
anytyme ill jus wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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10-28-04, 12:07 PM
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*k soz
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10-28-04, 04:19 PM
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ye i liked it, vocabulary woz gud, i dont really read these poems aswell, but this woz well written. gud job
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11-14-04, 04:09 PM
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pweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeetty pweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeze leace feedback ill return da favour i pwomise
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