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03-25-03, 12:56 AM | #1 | ||||||
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IP: A10D 4933
i hate myself. i'm happiest with you. i forever doubt my words, i can believe my thoughts, but will you? i could tell you everything, that i've ever felt, would you really listen, it wouldn't help. i've given up on me, i don't know who i am, i've written all my dreams, i'm going to drop my pen. forgive me if i change, love me no matter what, if i die before i wake, promise to never give up. we have flaws, its probably best we never showed them, this is my eternal hello to you, our poem.
my last piece, both rhyme-wise and writing |
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03-25-03, 02:10 PM | #2 | |||||||
Special Ghost To Blow
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
Theres SOmethin Reminiscent To Tha Way Things Seem With My Life SOmewhat But I Wouldnt Give Up On Someone I Care About
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03-26-03, 07:43 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: BFE5 28C7
It's a shame, you got some talent for sure...
....oh well, writing is a fleeting thing i guess...let the wind blow, and one day you'll hear it whisper inspiration...or something like that..(!?!?!).... ...respect and g'bye, you're a 'geeza' and a half....(!).... (don't worry, a geeza aint a bad thing)..... |
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03-27-03, 04:58 PM | #4 | |||||||
Atra Ludio or Hip-Hop?
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
It's sad really. I dunno what to say.
~Shalom~ |
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03-27-03, 06:07 PM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: C735 A6DB
sad....oh well, shit happens to stop do'n things...there a reason for everything...............
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03-27-03, 06:19 PM | #6 | |||||||
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DAMn yo its sad forealz......
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03-31-03, 01:32 AM | #7 | |||||||
..terror walks again..
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IP: 4577 CD9A
your so innertangled in yourself i do trip off u sum times. this was ill but too intertangled to develop. hit me on aim sum times. and peep my post rb sleeps on me hard
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