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Old 03-08-03, 06:05 PM   #1
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~~Broken Heart ~~

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Yo i wrote this back in da dayzzzzz.....


I will never forget the days we once had
The days when you were everything to me
My mind used to tell me we'd be together forever
But now I realize that was all a big dream
The dreams and feelings I have for you will never go
I wish I could take back that one regretful day
The day when I pressured you to open yo legs
and let you go on top i of me
Never did I think of the astonishing pain of regrets
That I would once have to live through
The sight of you in some other negga's arms
Makes my heart shatter into a million pieces
I sometimes wonder if you still think of me
Or if to you, I'm just a face in the crowd
I wish so very much that one day we can have it all back
But for now, I'll sit here silently
Remembering all the memories we once shared
Everyday my love and lust for you grows much stronger
Girl i'm hoping that one day you will feel the same
And put back the pieces of my broken heart....

Yo peep this HOLLA

LYRICAL G...........I'm a ghost......wun
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Old 03-08-03, 08:00 PM   #2
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damn yo that was deep, shit i could nearlly feel ya heart yo, lol, very nice.......
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Old 03-09-03, 11:05 AM   #3
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deep man very gud keep it up dawg
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Old 03-09-03, 02:31 PM   #4
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FOsho thnx for the Apreciation for the piece.....na'mean ....


UPPUN on this
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Old 03-09-03, 10:29 PM   #5
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holdin onto the past//remembering it slow, tho at the time it went too fast//crashed and burned//life upturned//lessons learned//yearning for her everyday//wish she'd come back around ur way//trade everything just to have another taste//but u don't realize what u got is goin to waste//placed all ur feelin in this one girl//u even went and made her ur world....


unfinished...i lost the feelin, sorry
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Old 03-11-03, 08:22 PM   #6
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YO EVER1 THNX FOR THE COMMENTS OR APRECIATE MY POETIC VISION NA'mean......UPPUN ON THIZ
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