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04-30-03, 05:41 PM | #1 | ||||||
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8 Bars of My Heart
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My "8 bars of Heart" My "8 bars of Heart"
I've been abu§ed and brui§ed in the heart/ §eem like I was doomed a§ I crept out the wound from the §tart/ When I was a baby I ate weed out the back §eat of my dad' § car/ That incident left me with a painful and permenant mental §car/ The world a§ I know it i§ full of pain and mental angui§h/ I wi§h pain wa§ more like match fire, ea§y to extingui§h/ referring to a match when its just lit When I wa§ younger walking down the §treet I got stuck up/ Lightning fla§hed before my eye..........Thought I wa§ about to die/ Nigga a§ked me for $2 and I wa§ gonna give it to him not gonna lie/ Turned around and it wa§ my freind so I gue§§ I lucked up/ I have grey hair§ at i§xteen cuz I'm real stre§§ed §till able so you could say that I'm real ble§§ed/ Before a tear §hed'§ down my eye I think about other§ wor§t off and decide not to cry/ I vi§ualize my§elf in §tarving ethoiopian'§ po§ition and notice how they barely §eem get by/ Next time you go through pain just remember it could be wor§t/ When going through pain ju§t realize that you're not the fir§t/ |
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04-30-03, 05:44 PM | #2 | ||||||
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uppin
Last edited by §olja*Lyricist : 04-30-03 at 05:51 PM. |
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04-30-03, 05:55 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 9D32 3C64
uppin
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04-30-03, 10:36 PM | #4 | ||||||
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not bad...
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05-01-03, 01:59 AM | #5 | ||||||
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nice
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05-01-03, 05:44 PM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: 9D32 3C64
thnx
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05-02-03, 05:04 PM | #7 | ||||||
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IP: 9D32 3C64
uppin 4 more response
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05-02-03, 10:21 PM | #8 | ||||||
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I like how it got me to think. Life is pretty rough kid... I know what cha mean... I feel ya
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05-02-03, 11:50 PM | #9 | |||||||
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Nice imagery...Cud really imagine wut you were sayin...felt ya emotion...besides that everythin wuz tite also...nice drop, mayn.
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05-02-03, 11:56 PM | #10 | ||||||
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the imagery was good....the emotion was felt, it was nice...it was predictable though, like i knew you were gonna end it on somethin optimistic by the middle of the 2nd stanza...it was good though, i can't front on it
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05-03-03, 08:48 AM | #11 | ||||||
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IP: 9D32 3C64
thx for the response
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05-03-03, 09:32 AM | #12 | ||||||
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IP: 70BA C566
SOMETIMES
I WISH I COULD DIE, YOU TO CAN FILL THE PAIN IN MY LIFE THE PAIN OF A KNIFE IN THE BACK, THE WANTING FOR THE THINGS THAT I LACK. THE PAIN THAT I POUR INTO TRACKS. THE PAIN THAT MANY MEN PUT INTO SACS. ITS DRASTIC PAIN CHANGED ME INTO AN ADICT FOR AUTOMATICS AND THE MATHMATICS OF THE STREET. THUG + RED + BLUE = BEEF NIC + DIME + OUNCE = Gs KNOWLEDGE + UNITY + LOVE = PEACE I WANT REST TILL THE EQUATION IS COMPLETE STAY UP SOLJA, AFTER PAIN ALWAYS COMES RELIEF ONE JSTACKS |
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05-03-03, 09:39 AM | #13 | ||||||
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that was tite man
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05-03-03, 10:39 PM | #14 | ||||||
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Damnz,
Luv`n this ... was quite raw eith ur emotions i could feel ur words very good!! Much props ... Really diggin ya style boo Pz |
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05-03-03, 10:45 PM | #15 | ||||||
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that was hot to def, i'm lovin it
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