Voted For: Tekneek

im so happy we could have this meetin, but it aint a happy greetin
cuz this weak spittin trip is in fa a beating
^^not much of a punch...1/10
aight look skinny home boi face it kid.
if you were 20 stone u still would'nt make it big.
^^he neva posted his pic...fake personal...1/10
imma do 20 lines plenty time to land these punches.
a land 1 each bar you land 1 each hundred.
^^weak and basic as fuck...1/10
you should make an alias with the name chaff.
coz reading your shit's one big PAYN in the ass.
^^GOOD..that's more like it boi...7/10
there's an old saying the GOOD die young.
so i guess you'll be around tom see your grandkid's son.
^^awww...had to go whack again...3/10
see tek never loose's to this type of opponent.
the type that get there 30 second's early and still miss the moment.
^^weak...weak...weak!!...2/10
payn will be terrified of mics when my lines-sre-finished.
sever-ya-head put that shit in a "BRIEFCASE", now "MIND-YA-BUSINES.
^^get rid of the hypens..played punch..2/10
this herb cant rip me in this battle imma Rip-Apart this kids Text.
I'll smash-ya-Chest wit Sharp-Objects.........................
................... n make ya ass BOUNCE like FALSE-CHECKS.
^^OK....4/10
a dont know why i bother battling ya pathetic type.
u 23years old and in your bedroom fo fuck's sake get a life.
^^ooh shit...he is 23...damn..this line is truth....6/10
go on da mtv show but da fact iz payn still wouldnt have true flow
cuz wen payn spitz, I only 'CBS/SEE BS' lyke da fu.kkin news show.
^^good.....6/10
Son, you might as well list ya style under miscellaneous
Here's a clue, the shit ain't wordplay if you still gotta explain it.
^^didn't rhyme...weak punch...2/10
You bein a dope mc, is non existent like RuPaul's clit is.
Cant tell if your dick or pussy....lol....like topless infants.
^^Weak and stupuid...1/10
look payn ain't shit, I ain't lose he ain't even rappin' right
Damn right I'm an asshole, this pussy ain't even half as tight
^^weak....1/10

OK....I don't really understand.You had lines like the CBS and payn in the ass...then ya got lines like...umm..85% of the verse.Too many basic shit in here.The one line that caught my eye was the 23 yr old one.I didn't believe it...till I checked his profile and saw it..damn...But overall...an inconisistant verse..

Dawg u couldnt hit me wit a punch if i was Movin in Slow Mo
so, "Craig Davis", return to R&B and to Doin ya Solo's
^^fuck you bring up craig davis for?....2/10
Whats worse is u Know Tho..but put it to use..its Knowledge
u could use some..lookin nappy as a dude who'd be workin McDonald's
^^basic....2/10
no College n doin it for years..but still never Witness Promotions
never gettin tha Notion that he looks greasier than Fish In the Ocean
^^fish ain't greasy...wtf you talking...2/10
this Kid should've Noticed..i aint the type to be delivered Fillers n Brag Lines
cuz im a Killer who Has Rhymes that intoxicate like a 'Miller' when u've Had 9!*
^^not much of a punch...1/10
Damn..this phony Sixshot revlover cat thought he really could Try Me?
wit sickness in my veins i'm resistin then killin this 'I.V.'!
^^Wtf..I.V?...3/10
battlin me wasnt Wise G..effortless..plus tha Madness jus Started
wit tar on ya heels u only able to keep pace wit Rappaz in Charlotte**
^^NO...weak....2/10
Ur my class science project how i gotcha Dissected in Session
plus ya spits AINT SHIT like a bulimic's Digestional Methods! damn!
^^good vocab and all...but weak...4/10
ya verse containin more forced multis than if i Threw Whores At 'Em..
n then they had that unwanted sex but while havin Two Orgasms
^^punch sucked and 1st line fake personals..he doesn't have forced multis..2/10
Wit some multis n metas ya style's still more played than Nintendo Games
you'd think i'm smokin O's of dro tha way i'm blowin 'Indo' Away!
^^his name is teekneek in case ya don't know..2/10
shoulda taken tha Craig Davis approach n packed them tunes wit da Sappy Flutes
I'm Raw, he has tha females screamin "Aww Naww" once seein his Nappy Roots! haha!
^^Hmm....best bar,....but nothing special...5/10

Ok...bad.Just by lookin at the verses...I saw you had better structure...so I thought you'd win..but when I read it..it was on the contrary.I didn't see anything good in your verse man.You stayed consistant on throwing out mediocre punches.Get some metas and wordsplay.No personals...his name is teekneek..so why you talking about craij davis and shit.

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Voted For: Tekneek

Vote for Tekneek.. in the begining of this verse.. the structure was perfect.. i could feel the flow with no problem.. punches were strong with decent personals.. personals couldve been better but they were there..
Multis were phenominal..i saw more multis from tekneek in a few lines than in PAYNs whole verse..

Payn.. some of ur lines didnt make sense.. and alot didnt rhyme.. ill break down ur first part to show you..

Dawg u couldnt hit me wit a punch if i was Movin in Slow Mo
so, "Craig Davis", return to R&B and to Doin ya Solo's
(this was alright.. but craig Davis? where did that come from?)

Whats worse is u Know Tho..but put it to use..its Knowledge
u could use some..lookin nappy as a dude who'd be workin McDonald's
(knowledge doesnt rhyme with McDonalds.. and the first line has ntohing to do with the 2nd)

no College n doin it for years..but still never Witness Promotions
never gettin tha Notion that he looks greasier than Fish In the Ocean
(this was the better of ur lines i guess.. but i dont think fish are greasy..)

this Kid should've Noticed..i aint the type to be delivered Fillers n Brag Lines
cuz im a Killer who Has Rhymes that intoxicate like a 'Miller' when u've Had 9!*
(this makes no sense to me.. first u say ur not the type that brags.. and in the next line.. u brag about being a killer with great rhymes.. this lost me)

All in All v/Tekneek

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