http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/revokeaimusic.htm

did this quick....my throat was dry so i lose some momentum at times..

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no doubt... good to see u droppin again, you have great emotion for someone gettin into this- but you have to find bars your comfortable spitting so you can flow, cuz right now its not flowing- try a couple less syllables in a line for a second see where your most comfortable and tailor your rhymes to that... 1

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yea....had to do it quick then throat was dry..didnt help lol...gonna redo it
but not till tomarrow....thanks for tha feed

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Hahaha this was pretty good, but catch a breath..fam..lol U was spittin ......off at times but overall is was nice u gettin betta at the flow i love the beat man WestNia ish.....Man we got to drop collabs nice drop and it seemed like some of yo lines were stretched u try to keep hold on em it happened to me 2..lol

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wow, nice track, damn, you were feeling yourself, i can tell with how you spit, quick and f**kin emotional, nice lyrics too, i was feeling this drop, good beat too, i would just say like these fellas did and slow down, but i know you probably couldnt help yaself, spitting about this corrupt industry shit...nice track,keep it up..

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no flo....

lyrics were good tho.