yeah i know i been gone for a minute, but i recently had some motivation, and said fuck it, dusted the mic off and did some shit

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3775459

word up sons, and yea i ifinished recordin about 1 hour ago, lmao late as hell, but word yo!!

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225897
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224618

Beat is ok. Not my kinda beat but it's ok. Not feelin the hook. Your delivery is aight. It fits the beat but it seems to me like it could be better. Flow is good. Lyrics are straight too. Keep grindin

being white im jealous...cuz if i did a white power song id be hung alive.....ya emotion on the black power seems lame....you should reall emphasize that....sounds like theres a hiss in the backround distracting me from you words...but id didnt sound bad, so flow was ight....yep more more emotion....has potential to be a real good song...but as is, its average...re-do this song, and up emotion and it could be real good...nice concept n shit tho

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aight thanx fa tha feed, lol and as for tha white power thing, its not like that, its like, black people are always tryna get over cuz they r black, they take advantage of it but not the right advantage, they say all this shit about slavery and minorities, but they dont know half of the reasons why they sayin shit, or what they even talkin about