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Old 08-22-03, 06:52 PM   #1
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"My Last Breath" (Quite Possibly Tha Best Song Ive Layed Down.. Off The Lp.. ENJOY!!)

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New track.. produced by sho down...
its dope... prob my best lyrically.. emotion and all that good shit..
i still dont have a condensor.. so the quality isnt ill yet.. but it soon will

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/invasionmusic.htm

http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=523991&q=Lo
http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=523991&q=Hi
http://www.soundclick.com/util/Down...g.cfm?ID=523991

first track...

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Old 08-22-03, 07:36 PM   #2
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its pretty hot dawg. use some EQ and balance out the mids and highs. add some low frequency to your voice. i just got a new condensor. im glad i dont need to deal with that bullshit anymore.
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Old 08-22-03, 07:54 PM   #3
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lol yeh tru
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Old 08-22-03, 09:04 PM   #4
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Damn!! You got serieus skills kid! But the beats gotta bumb! sorry kid! We need 2 hook up though, we're a producers duo, check a snippet of our latest productions @ http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/w...productions.htm we ought 2 make beautifull babies together!!

p'z

p.s. Can you upload the acapella of this joint? We will make a remix of this joint if we can.

contact me @ victorcharly4wondergroundproductions@hotmail.com

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Old 08-23-03, 12:59 AM   #5
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the beat is type hot.....delivery was good, concept of the song is serious.....definitely feelin it.....flow was crispy, vocal presence was definitely good....hook was definitely hot......this gets a 8/10, in my opinion........keep doing your thing dawg.....OnE





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Old 08-23-03, 10:20 AM   #6
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Fucking Ill Mun...Flow, Delivery And Emotion Were All On Point Very Nicely...Hook Is Nice...Lyrically It Was Well Done...All Round This Was A Top Track...Quality Was Good But To Be Like Pro Polished It Would Be Fucken Smooth...Keep It Up.......Pz.........
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Old 08-23-03, 03:07 PM   #7
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yeh.. thanx.. appreciate it..

as soon as i get my setup.. sound quality gonna be boooomin

and im checkin that site now
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Old 08-23-03, 03:08 PM   #8
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yo man.. get at me on AIM.. i kinda like that beat..... the first one on it
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Old 08-24-03, 07:18 AM   #9
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I really did enjoy this, your flow is onpoint throughout the whole track and it was very obvious of a good delivery and somewhat of decent mic presence. The emotion was enough to get me nodding my head and basically fit the beat exactly, mos' definite. Overall, a very nice track and yes, probably one of your "better" ones, because I was listening to some of your other material..
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Old 08-25-03, 01:21 AM   #10
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no doubt.. thanx... glad you listened to some of my other shit to
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