This is some light shit. Our first collab. I'm disappointed about how it turned out. Not the best sshit but I think its worth a listen. Sorry about the soar throat. Next week will be better.

Verse 1: Fred Wycheck
Verse 2: Gimics
Verse 3: OpeY
Hook: Fred Wycheck

Beat: Auditory

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... oh yea... FUCK THE PRODUCTIONS

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LOL i loved this...
Fred was good, the metaphore line had me laughing flow was good but off like once
Gimic... sorry kid but you didnt do it for me, your whole verse was just filler excpet the mic addict line
opey... you are now my fav audio... you had me laughing through most of it..

'wanted more talent so I jacked the productions'

the hook was funny...good job kinds

and i liked the beat...was it original?

'Dont speak our name there are reprocussions....' nice closer

if you would be so kind
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84636

What beat is this? Dope.
Typing as I listen. I'll be harsh.

Fred - Mic presense needs work, its not bad though. Would prolly sound better with dope quality. Vocals need to be turned up a little bit, voice is coo. Flow is on, and lyrics are dope, but not really on a diss level. Didnt hear any hard hitting personals.
(Not too sure about the "I act like Im chokin on sperm and spit it out clearly" line. I mean, I get what your saying, but the majority of the time it will sound like your implying that you routinely choke on sperm.

Hook - nothing special

Gimics - Quality is horrible. Voice is coo, I have to imagine it with some decent quality though. Flow is coo, sounded awkward to me though, but it was str8. Lyrics were ok. (I think i heard something I thought I have heard somewhere else before, still thinkin about it.) Ummm.. not to much else to say...

Opey - Work on breath control. Voice is coo, flow is str8. Lyrics also are pretty nice, but predictable, and nothing jaw dropping. Second or fifth time Ive heard a rubber/latex line. Better personals than the other cats, and an overall coo verse.

Lyricaly this was ok. I mean, it was DOPE on an RB level... average on a net level.

Overall it was worth the listen.. im not feeling the whole net-crew thing though. I guess if your real bored its a coo hobby and shit, or if you aint got a real rap scene in your town. So whatever...

Im Tired

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im not tryin to be an asshole.....but the fact that everyone voted you most likely to make it off the net..and best audio head....

HOW...

not tryin to be a dick

but your flow and delivery needs alot of work man..

tahts jsut my 2 cents...take it as hate...whatever

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i wasnt voted most likely to make it off the net lol. Jae Cyph was... which could be worse lol. And I know I'm not the nicest. I say it everytime someone questions it lol. But this was not even close to the shit im cabable of. I wrote a little 16 bar in about 15 minutes.... hit record... spit with a sore throat (which i know u can hear) and slapped my vocal presets on it. I have a lot of tracks that no one has heard on here. I spend all day makin beats and writing/recording music. I'm gettin paid to do it right now so I must be doin somethin right. But I dont give a shit about this net shit. If u care about it then somethin is wrong with you. I wouldnt dare think about puttin one of my tracks up on rb. Maybe when my album is done Ill put up a sampler or somethin. But fuck it I said this track was shit when I put it up.

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dog who is paying you and where can i get there number

lol

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"(Not too sure about the "I act like Im chokin on sperm and spit it out clearly" line. I mean, I get what your saying, but the majority of the time it will sound like your implying that you routinely choke on sperm.)"

you'll find out that I do shit like that...I'm not really sure why I do it but it's kinda like a trademard, I just dont give a fuck about what people may think, I just say it. And I purposely wrote that line cuz I knew people would take it the wrong way. I even do that on serious tracks, it's too let people know that they shouldnt take shit so literally and listen to the meaning...well enough about me...lets here a little about you lol

-peace

nice beat i agree.... nice 1st verse, rode tha beat nice, 2nd man's i guess gimics.. nice ass flow but vol is a li'l loud... actually, i think fred's was too low... you were more on topic fo-real, some nice disses.. opey's got a nice flow on this, falls off a bit near the middle, then u come in with a nice multi.. makes up 4 it.. lol...

over all this is a nice track, qual could have been better, some of the inner rhyme sounded off a bit, but deff. a nice track..

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ok please explain that to me fred?...

people shouldnt take the simplest meanings of a song..OR the deeper meaning literally OR metaphorically is basically what you are saying...

so WAHT is the point of me even listening to you...why not just upload the beat

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haha.... i have to agree. sorry fred... stupid comment man lol

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lmao my bad, I meant that I dont care about my image, I'll say "I've got a small dick, it's hard for you to fuck me up", and won't care what people think. people just take shit to seriously times. namean? they need to look past what I said. I was fucked up when I said that...1st period at school and I got there late too, JUST woke up lmao. didnt have a clue what I was saying.

-peace