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Old 03-03-09, 11:44 PM   #16
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Actually wasn't bad for bein back i couldn't follow the long ass punches of your opponent i would say if he got more to da point his would have been better but yours flowed nice and was pretty sick to.

Fav. lines- "i might be rusty but i don't erode, tell me how you rip it?
watch me tear u into bits, n let the fingers do the dissin,
im high mate, but wont make heavy work out of a flyweight,
i got the potent flows, n the lyrics classed as hi grade,"
Thats what put you on top in my opinion
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Old 03-04-09, 12:08 AM   #17
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Well, its easy to see that murda took this... he actually had puns and some decent lines, althought you didnt execute well brother... some of your lines are stretched and have poor wording... Work on this for more experienced opponents.

Seemed to me that E C was juss rhyming.
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Old 03-04-09, 09:47 AM   #18
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problem sort your shit out for fuck sake......... dont rate peoples verse like e.c's like that-coz its so easy to see he is rusty when you read it.jesus wtf, e.c verse is by far better no matter what comment he wrote after.


no thats just hate fam....

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^^^ that just make sure u know what im rhyming or what the punch relate's to..

but seriously u didnt read my verse then so hop off he's nuts...
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Old 03-04-09, 09:49 AM   #19
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Actually wasn't bad for bein back i couldn't follow the long ass punches of your opponent i would say if he got more to da point his would have been better but yours flowed nice and was pretty sick to.

Fav. lines- "i might be rusty but i don't erode, tell me how you rip it?
watch me tear u into bits, n let the fingers do the dissin,
im high mate, but wont make heavy work out of a flyweight,
i got the potent flows, n the lyrics classed as hi grade,"
Thats what put you on top in my opinion



^^^ where the hard punch at???
where the multis???


ARE U FUCKING SERIOUS????
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Old 03-04-09, 10:10 AM   #20
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i have a feeling Murdah bit those lines

cuz his entire concept/style/everything changed in a matter of a day.
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Old 03-04-09, 10:46 AM   #21
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and i have a feeling that i didnt...
but feel free to go look around or whatever let me know what u find...
and when u come back empty handed let me know if u wanna battle...

im not beef just want to battle everyone to see where i stand...

i told ya i was playing but when i text battle i make my shit stand out and i make sure its something hot....

but i see you can not understand my style...
but its cool because my style of writing will change not my battle style of spitting
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Old 03-04-09, 11:02 AM   #22
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dude, your style did a complete 180 in a day. its fishy. but i'm not gonna waste the time to find if you bite or not. It's pretty obvious.
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Old 03-04-09, 12:08 PM   #23
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my votes for ec....he wrote rhymes basically and the other dude was tryin to be all wittty and it wasnt really workin at all..the shit didnt rhyme and if it did it wasnt really hittin hard...idk yo no hatin just sayin

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Old 03-04-09, 12:56 PM   #24
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^^^ where the hard punch at???
where the multis???


ARE U FUCKING SERIOUS????



And i understand about the punches you had more. But if you really battled sometimes its not about punchlines. people don't say omg did you hear that punch sometimes they say omg did you hear that personal or did you hear about what he said he was goin to do to him. No hate bra. I didn't say you sucked or nothin. Thats jus the problem on here wich is why everyone leaves because people don't no how to vote. Its not always about the punches. but at least you spoke your mind so no hate.
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Old 03-04-09, 12:57 PM   #25
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my votes for ec....he wrote rhymes basically and the other dude was tryin to be all wittty and it wasnt really workin at all..the shit didnt rhyme and if it did it wasnt really hittin hard...idk yo no hatin just sayin

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No it rhymed its jus that he had such long lines most feel off of the rhymes like i did wich is why i did not like it as much as E.C.
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Old 03-04-09, 03:02 PM   #26
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dude, your style did a complete 180 in a day. its fishy. but i'm not gonna waste the time to find if you bite or not. It's pretty obvious.


there was a complet difference due to the fact why drop good punches and waste a verse in a cypher when it means noting, only matters when u battle thats what go on a record not cypher drops so why waste good material on cyphers i only bullshit and drop whatever comes to mind there fuck how its spell or anything word its all just for fun right???

then when its battle time i write out as many lines as i can also think about old punches and see if i can flip it a different way same concept drop diferently i come at it different depending the mod im in thas all and now u think i bite because I CAP and " MY PUNCHES " ~ to relate the burning sensation you feel LIKE ' PROFESSIONAL CRUNCHES ' are you serious????

maybe u guys drop ya hardpunches in cyphers maybe thats why when ya battle u sound weaker then u think...
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Old 03-04-09, 03:24 PM   #27
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What the fuck @ this battle?

E.C: I know you can drop better than that shit, I've seen it before. It had a bunch of self glorification and the punches didn't really hammer down that hard. I know you got better game than that brother.

MurDaH187: What the fuck? Like really.. what the fuck? Fucking go look at the battle leagues or something and get an idea of how to structure a verse. You don't need to "emphasize words like this" OR LIKE THIS, we fucking get it. Like T-Bag wordplay? Come on dude..

Blah..

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