If ur working skillz match ur ryhmes, thats why u have no job Today
Stealing my Inhalers the only way you could take my Breath Away
Y's ur name say liqour? Alcohols sumwhere U've never Been
I damn this bitch to hell............Like Beavers Comittin Sins
Y'd u except? u've lost ur mind like Inhalin too much Lead
You suck like Teeth being used and giving some bad Head
I aint a slut dude, this wont go easy like ur first battle Did
U'll never find a crew, Terri fox wouldnt run with u Kid
Ur lines are Immature just like urself from Bottom to Top
If u went to New York for New years ur balls still wouldnt Drop
I give you absolutely no props like Mimes actin on Stage
I'll ruin u like novel books when turning to the Last Page
U make me wana Hurl, L swallows more Nut than Squirals
Its cuz you have no job that U have all the Time in the World! (His Last Post)

not a bad verse good attempts on personals and pounches
you could focus spittin more about that other person though
no hatein

You think your lines are nasty, But they as pure as nuns
Your 14 lines, put to no use, like 9/11 funds
Takin' action, Slashin his chances like a fraction
Mah verse, You couldn't 'beat it' if your name was Micheal Jackson
Though your names Mob, Your rhymes could never be deep
Your lines brightly colored and soft, I'll Call you spits Peeps
This kid is up here tryin to represent windsor
When his spits couldnt be hot if he bit the earths core
Feelin boulimic, After takin you verse in I had to vomit
Like Bush and iraq, This battle wasn't fair, So you had no choice but to bomb-it.

shorter but it feels like this verse was stronger on metas and pounches
you also had a betta structure and a cleaner flow

my vote:Liquor of Tears

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