Fragant fragrance consuming me wholly
while i starve to obtain its origin;
a true historian, with false misconception.
Miss deception was working over-time
to work over time and make my trues
false and her faults mine.
An artistic adjective, linguistic laxative
that's quick and smooth but then comes the shit,
and it takes a whiff to remember the stench
of hard earned money wasted and emotion spent.
The terrible truth touches tellers of drama with fact,
that what goes around comes around
so if you look over you shoulder, your front is your back...

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

my poetry:
untitled

had to read, and it was good man
my fav line was:
"An artistic adjective, linguistic laxative"
ever so short, yet your word play was great...got a visual on confusion and everything flippin scripts on you.
nice drop.

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[DROPS THE MIC]

Switch (The Poet)



"Cry havok and let slip, the dogs of war"
-William Shakespeare

"Before you judge someone remember...
Amateurs built the arc, Professionals built the Titanic."
-Unknown

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The alliteration added nothing and took away some sincerity... You shouldn't try so hard.

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