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Check Ins Are Due Tuesday By 12 Midnight Eastern
Verses Are Due Fridays By 12 Midnight Eastern
Voting Ends Sunday At 12 Midnight Eastern

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nice, shits finally up agian; anyway, checkin in.

check..........

you cool wit ten lines?

yeah it's cool...I'll drop tommarow probably

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imma just drop tonight cuz i wont be gettin back from my game by 12.... and i thought u was droppin today to.... what happend to that?

I aint seein any punches like your record to be exact
And Like new Zeland, Where they at? ….
… can only imagine how bad it is if you’ll rep this before that
you could shove ya verse in all of RV’s asses…when he’s done
this cunt Plutonium still wouldn’t fuck me over or screw anyone
send yo ass str8 BACK to the lab! Don’t act tuff
aint nothing new…
…like traffic jams yo hood’s always backed up
like it should, fo yo own good, I’ll lay u out like futons
slash that for this fag…
…his ass on more tossed salads then mutha fuckin croutons
who be on, the flight we flew u on, faggot wit two dads
who’s mad, you mad?…
… your punches couldn’t draw blood written on maxi’Pads’



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yo voters…. hit me up wit some real Chartism, im here in the league to elevate and not just read dickrider votes

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here it is...something I cooked up in 15 mins, hope it ain't too bad...

noone's picture perfect...and I'm now convinced by his name
but now Pluto's getting good hang of it...
...PP's still hanging on some photo frames
think you got game? damn, the weakness in you is wide open
adding a 2 to a common phrase...was his only kodak moment
just lemme draw a picture...of everyone on RV start to faint
cause your kind of perfection...is some scribbles I did on paint
man, it would beat you in quality, texture and color balance
and guess what lil' kid?

damn! thinking you're the man and everything, joined in march
but what kind of vets still leave spaces in between each bar?

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VOTE: Picture perfect

dis was kinda poor from both of u. but had 2 giv it 2 sum1, gave it 2 picture perfect cos his flowed betta despit lame lil dots n shit between llinez, and beacuase of multis, neither of u hit hard in my opinion

no h8. Peace

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aint seein any punches like your record to be exact
And Like new Zeland, Where they at? ….
… can only imagine how bad it is if you’ll rep this before that
^^stretched as fuck no matter how you break the bar up 2/10
you could shove ya verse in all of RV’s asses…when he’s done
this cunt Plutonium still wouldn’t fuck me over or screw anyone
^^wack 2/10
send yo ass str8 BACK to the lab! Don’t act tuff
aint nothing new…
…like traffic jams yo hood’s always backed up
^^wack 2/10
like it should, fo yo own good, I’ll lay u out like futons
slash that for this fag…
…his ass on more tossed salads then mutha fuckin croutons
^^ no need for the "mutha fuckin" but good bar 6/10
who be on, the flight we flew u on, faggot wit two dads
who’s mad, you mad?…
… your punches couldn’t draw blood written on maxi’Pads’
^^what was the point of the whos mad you mad made the bar weak 3/10

overall : 15/50 (30%)

plutonium:

noone's picture perfect...and I'm now convinced by his name
but now Pluto's getting good hang of it...
...PP's still hanging on some photo frames
^^decent name play wack bar all together 3/10
think you got game? damn, the weakness in you is wide open
adding a 2 to a common phrase...was his only kodak moment
^^ wack 2/10
just lemme draw a picture...of everyone on RV start to faint
cause your kind of perfection...is some scribbles I did on paint
^^wack 2/10
man, it would beat you in quality, texture and color balance
and guess what lil' kid? im artistically challenged
^^ decent 5/10
damn! thinking you're the man and everything, joined in march
but what kind of vets still leave spaces in between each bar?
^^ best bar of the battle 8/10

overall : 20/50 (40%)

vote : plutonium

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who be on, the flight we flew u on, faggot wit two dads
who’s mad, you mad?…
… your punches couldn’t draw blood written on maxi’Pads’
^^what was the point of the whos mad you mad made the bar weak 3/10
^^^^^^uh.. cuz it's flow and sounded good... at least in my head it did, but good votin, at least u hated on both and not just me. a lil praise for good wordplay wouldn't hurt though. i'll check out your battle and see if u live up to your voting standards. fuckin 30% shit.

Picture:
Ya verse wasnt bad...the first bar was stretched, but the rest of the lines were straight...there was a decent flow to it...punches actually connected well...but the only thing is, ya punches were played out...shit like "u've got two dads" and "tossed salad" are played yo...but i still liked ya last line tho, i've never seen it flipped like that...


Plutonium:
Not bad, but definitely not ya best....structure was coo so there was a good flow....opener was good, but the 'picture' & 'art' shit was startin to git old quick...but punchwise, u still managed to connect....overall, u had a lil more creativity cuz of concepts that were more fresh...

V/ Plutonium, but not by much...

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