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Check Ins Are Due Tuesday By 12 Midnight Eastern
Verses Are Due Fridays By 12 Midnight Eastern
Voting Ends Sunday At 12 Midnight Eastern

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yes check

damn the check was due tonight @ midnight

i hope enygma makes it

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1807088
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1807094
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...657#post1807657

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Hmm.......I thought the check in was supposed to be Wednesday. Ohh well. If I can check in now, that'd be cool. If not, congrats Dizzie....

I'll probably drop anyway if I don't see a response by sometime tomorrow

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yea u check'd in on time... it was still tuesday night

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Blah....quick 10, just match it

S is just ass....constantly leaving a mess of his tracks
Thought he was green with envy......that's just the S scents of rap
I'll provide your soundclick link.....how could he be just unsigned
Now we can all listen to ya beat..............................ing of a lifetime
But S is the shit......you should all just bow respectfully
Cause the only time he's challenged.....................is mentally
Giving Dizzie his props.....don't know what the feud is
He's a religious god.....the rest of us just buddhist
Blah, blah....filler, filler, blah blah......finish him
^^^^Stealing dizzie's style and still easily deminished him

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wackness X 10, cant belive u dropped that verse purposely
the professor in your sig? only thing ud school is a nursery
i run tracks around his verse, and i aint even rappin
so it just proves the kids out standing.. near other people who have talent
kids hiding his sexuality, and hes full of resentment
hes so far in the closest.. he found next years christmas presents
and u dissed my soundclick, shit when i opened up his page
his shits so NOT hot.. it almost started another ice age
noone on the site likes him, trust me, they all wanna diss him
& the kids always thumbs-up...
but u dont wanna know where he stick' em

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Pretty good battle....real personal, but all in all I think S-Dizzle the fat mack won it...

and u dissed my soundclick, shit when i opened up his page
his shits so NOT hot.. it almost started another ice age

Them 2 bars did it for me, Shit hurt my feelins and it aint even my soundclick LoL

Enygma u tried man but all that "........................" shit just to make ya verse look even was unecessary.

I'll provide your soundclick link.....how could he be just unsigned
Now we can all listen to ya beat....ing of a lifetime

^still would of had the same effect with less "......"s but all in all it was a good try but it just missed bein a good punch by a lil bit, keep workin though man u'll get it.

Sdizzle man u've really elevated since u came from RB when u was just a topical head, I'm proud of ya fatso keep up the good work

Vote - Sdiz

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enygmas caught my attention, sdizzle u had a OWNAGE opener, then it just seemed to fall off, most of ur lines were just played and wack, but ok, seemed like u didnt put much thought into it, which i dont understand.. expecially if u want to WIN.... anywayz
enygma had better word play ( S scents.. NICE)
just overall much betta structure and use of words and metaphores
elevate DIZZLE jesus, but god job to both

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i got to go Sdizzle

man the shit was ight liked it alot felt the heat come off the mic when you was done so V/Sdizzle

your all dumb, enigma won this seriously, dizzle came weak, this is an honest vote

wackness X 10, cant belive u dropped that verse purposely
the professor in your sig? only thing ud school is a nursery
i run tracks around his verse, and i aint even rappin
so it just proves the kids out standing.. near other people who have talent
kids hiding his sexuality, and hes full of resentment
hes so far in the closest.. he found next years christmas presents
^^^^ real dope
and u dissed my soundclick, shit when i opened up his page
his shits so NOT hot.. it almost started another ice age
noone on the site likes him, trust me, they all wanna diss him
& the kids always thumbs-up...
but u dont wanna know where he stick' em
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S is just ass....constantly leaving a mess of his tracks
Thought he was green with envy......that's just the S scents of rap
I'll provide your soundclick link.....how could he be just unsigned
Now we can all listen to ya beat..............................ing of a lifetime
But S is the shit......you should all just bow respectfully
Cause the only time he's challenged.....................is mentally
Giving Dizzie his props.....don't know what the feud is
He's a religious god.....the rest of us just buddhist
Blah, blah....filler, filler, blah blah......finish him
^^^^Stealing dizzie's style and still easily deminished him
^^^^^^^not so dope
sdizzle for havin some um... dopeness, but definate props to that so far in the closet line.

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Shame on Dizzie for feeding with that soundclick line. Anyway, nice battle.

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v/ sdizzle

enygma you didnt come as hot as usual... you had some dope lines.... i like the buddhist one that was a dope meta and the opener was striaght but overall you didnt come that dope

7.2/10

sdizzle:

you had a pretty consistent verse... opener was dope.. stayed good all the way through.. good wordplay and punches

overall : 7.9/10

v/sdizzle

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Enygma, You flipped 4 of those 10 lines...

But S is the shit......you should all just bow respectfully
Cause the only time he's challenged.....................is mentally

Blah, blah....filler, filler, blah blah......finish him
^^^^Stealing dizzie's style and still easily deminished him

both flipped... and flipped badly...

I'll provide your soundclick link.....how could he be just unsigned
Now we can all listen to ya beat..............................ing of a lifetime

I did the concept alot better... and so did everybody else that used it after me...

and any one of these...

i run tracks around his verse, and i aint even rappin
so it just proves the kids out standing.. near other people who have talent
kids hiding his sexuality, and hes full of resentment
hes so far in the closest.. he found next years christmas presents
and u dissed my soundclick, shit when i opened up his page
his shits so NOT hot.. it almost started another ice age
noone on the site likes him, trust me, they all wanna diss him
& the kids always thumbs-up...
but u dont wanna know where he stick' em

crushed your verse... any single one of those couplets...



Vote: Dizzle... 1. for havin a better verse... 2. for not flipping Avalon LLL lines...

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